Plz help with Feedback for my story!

[Kassidy.episode]

I’ve published a new story lately and have 4 Episodes out. I don’t want to continue with it if it’s boring to others since I work on it everyday. If you have time plz check it out.

Story cover:
Story Style: Ink
Author: Kassidy
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4708991395758080

[AMagic]

Feedback Group {OFFICIALLY OPEN}

WELCOME TO THE FEEDBACK GROUP!!! Here you come to get feedback on your story, there are three of us @Forever1201 @Danielle318 & @AMagic if you would like to join PM me. RULES You may not get upset over a truthful review. We can accept or deny your review. It will be denied if you don’t give us your Story Link, Title, & Cover, plus a description of your story. We are not robots, we have lives outside of the forums, so you must be patient. When you have gotten your feedback, make sure t…

[Kassidy.episode]

Yeah I’ll do it I’ll send the info in a few.

[Kassidy.episode]

Title: The Crimson’s Vampire Curse

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4708991395758080
Description: One night changed her life meeting a vampire name Charles Crimson. Years later when a baby is born it turns out that she is cursed. Will there ever be a happy ending for them all?