- Not Cliche
Are we voting on just the cover or the cover and the description?
Just the cover. The description was extra. But if you want to leave feedback you can.
Oh okay, the plot doesn’t really interest me but the cover is beautiful.
Anything, I can change for the description.
Are you asking me what you should change in the description? If you are I’d just say write what interests you
Okay, but I don’t want it to come off cliche, it’s a really good story, about a really good topic. I don’t want people to think it’s a story about a girl who wears make-up and BAM she is popular.
Yeah, that’s pretty much what I got from it that it was a makeover story, it might help if you give some more in depth details about the storyline?
Okay… how about this.
Comicbook loving, tomboy. Ava Novero is your low-self esteem loner, bullying, bad grades and a an unloved face, can she find herself in make-up?
Yeah that sounds better, I feel like I’m more attached to the mc so I’d be interested too see her story.
Yeah, I’d read that if that was the desc more than the first version
I’m sorry I don’t get the sentence there is a typo
I mean that, I’d be more likely to read the story if the desc (description) was
Oh, I didn’t get the abbreviation my bad. Im glad you like that one better. I like it too.