Sooo I had this idea for a story (I’m still workin on my most current) abt this ignorant daughter of a high class detective.
She basically tries to hunt down a criminal who her dad is investigating in an attempt to break free of his grip n prove herself. She discovers an organised crime boss (still workin on the fake mafia name I’m gonna use) using secret FBI information. She discovers him n starts to fall for him bc he manipulates her into not telling her dad. Then she begins to discover the realities of him. Since he’s a manipulator, ruthless n disgusting criminal. It will then b down to the points system to if she gets stuck in his web n has a v bad outcome (death) or if she escapes him and manages to get him locked up. Do u think u would read it? Or is it too cliche? It will probably b quite long n I’m still not sure…
- Lol no, babe far too cliche.
- u should, it’s low-key original!