Post Your Stories Here! And Get Feed Back From An Episode Director!


#1

Hey Episode!

Here, you can post your stories and get feedback on how to improve them! @FreakyEvilMargs (AKA me) will review the stories and give you tips.

Keep Writing Babes!
Claire :kissing_cat:


#2

Hey! This is great, thank you so much :cupid:

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Title: Scandalous
Author: Mina
Genre: Drama/mystery
Description: After the murder of her best friend, Catalina uncovers secrets that change everything she thought she knew, and clues that could lead her to the killer before they strike again.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4694544914055168

Choices matter in this story! Your choices determine if the killer is found, and who lives or dies.


#3

Wow this story sounds cool. I’ve been dying for some good mystery stories


#4

Thanks so much for this!
Title: H&V: Our Story
Author: Ki_Writes
Genre: Action
Description: When Ava’s younger sister goes missing, she must work with a group of superheros to save her.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4786197070741504


#5

This story seems awesome! Thanks for posting! :kissing_cat:


#6

Sounds cool. :wink: Can’t wait to read.


#7

Thank you! I hope you enjoy it if you decide to read (:


#8

Hey there! I would love to get a feedback for my new story!

Title: H & V: Shadows of My Past
Author: Zayen Ng
Description: Running from a secret organization that raised you as an assassin, how long could you hide before your past catches up to you? How far will things have to go before you kill again?
Number of Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Genre: Action, Thriller, Romance, Mystery
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4909984744865792


#9

Hey guys!

I just published my new story

Countless Mistakes

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#10

Hey there!

Thank you for creating this thread and for reviewing our stories!

Here are the details of mine:

Story Title: Your Secret Admirer
Author: EpisodeCray
Description: What happens when Natalia’s secret love letter ends up in the hands of the wrong boy? Will she fall in love or will everything fall apart?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4654341800198144

Thank you for your time. I hope you’ll enjoy my story!

X


#11

Hi, Claire!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. This is my first story ever but I have put a lot of effort in it and would highly appreciate any feedback! I promise, the story will keep you hooked :blush:

My story details:

Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af


#12

Title: The Twins
Author: Remaas
Genre: Romance
Link:↓↓↓↓


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Please guys check mine out its new
Reply if u want RFR
Thank you


#13

Hi there,
My story is I am Dating a Liar and I would love a feedback from you to how to improvise them.

Title - I am Dating a Liar
Genre - Drama
Description - Ava had horrible past so she is afraid to date anyone. She started working in new company where her boss try to get her so she lied to ignore her boss that she is already dating.
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5425545387311104

Thank You so much.


#14

My first ever story, please feel free to check it out! :smile:

Title- The art of seduction
Author- Chy.dillon
Genre- Romance/action
description- You start working at a nightclub, what happens when your recognized by your dads past? Will your dads actions catch up to you? Nothing is what it seems.
story link_ http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5630728767930368 1

I Would apprieciate it so much if you could read my story and leave me any form of feedback! :blush:The%20art%20of%20seduction


#15

Hey @Mina!

I just started reading Scandalous and I love it already! The backgrounds and the cover are exceptionally well-made. The way you coded it was incredible. The rain effect and the positions were amazing. The story was really good; i’m sure you have a creative mind. I love the variety between the races, that’s exactly what Episode is looking for.
Keep Writing, cause that’s definitely your thing.

Love,
Claire :kissing_cat:


#16

Hi! I’m kinda new to writing stories on Episode and I’ve recently published The Kingdom Of Outcasts. :slight_smile:

About:
Outcasts are forbidden and kingdoms are separated. The ones without magic are trapped under The Old Kingdom.


#17

First of all, thank you so much for making this! If you read my story, I hope you enjoy it! :heart::heart::heart::heart:

Title: The Most Powerful Scream

Author: CatEyedGoddess

Genre: Drama

Description: Tally is a mute trying to find her voice again. She suddenly gains the attention of the whole school when she starts speaking again and befriends Alexander Crawford.

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4730912379633664


#18

Hi!! Thank you for making this post :smile:
Here’s my story for the Heroes VS Villains contest!

Story Title: H & V: Deadly Seven
Description: It’s just you and your little sister, Anne. But when you just found out something is wrong with her, everything becomes complicated. Can you solve the puzzle and save your sister?

Chapters: 3 (complete!)
Genre: Drama/Romance/Comedy
Author: Bellarina CH
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5284993178140672
Style: Limelight
Features: MALE Main Character, Character customization, Multiple endings!

Please don’t hesitate to share your opinion about the story. You can mail me through episode or
you can follow my instagram for sneak peeks and updates too!
@bellarina.episode
Thank you!


#19

Hi. I’d love to get feedback on my story.

TITLE: Many Me
GENRE: Mixed. Adventure/Romance/Drama/Comedy
AUTHOR: DaziCat
INSTAGRAM: DaziCat
STYLE: Ink
DESCRIPTION: A chance encounter, a tragic accident and a dark secret pull Sabina into a career as a professional con-artist. It’s a life of intrigue, seduction and danger. She just accepted the biggest assignment of her career and it will also be the most dangerous. What she doesn’t know is that her personal life and her professional life will soon clash throwing everything into a tail spin. Plots/sub-plots.

Many Me by: DaziCat


#20

Who did your cover?