Posted my first ever story! R4R?

Insta - alexakaela_

please leave feedback in the fan mail & I will do the same with your stories!! (p.s i just brought more passes) :yum:

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Hi! I recently published my new story… I’ll do a R4R if you want.
Anywhere But Here*

Description: Ellie and her friends are used to being on the run from the scanners in their dystopian society. But who will come to her rescue after she is face to face with one?

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I’ll read your story now !! :slight_smile:

Hey I’m just new with all of the episode community. I wanted to create my own story. I would love to ear about your feedback of my story and it will be a pleasure to read yours anyway…

Description : It’s starts like many others stories but this is about true new friendship and different ways of seeing life. As well as the consequences that go with it.

Based on a true story

links :

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Hey I’ll join in, too!
My name is Natasha and I’m the author of High Flight! High Flight is a very new, exciting Action/Wartime story. You have been recruited for the elite academy TOPGUN! I’d encourage you to take a read, and I’ll do a R4R, too!!

Title: High Flight
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon!)
Genre: action, wartime, drama

Description: You have been selected to be apart of the elite United States Navy Strike Fighter Tactics Instructor program, better known as TOPGUN. With this comes friendship, love, loss, & war.

This includes customizable MC and LI!

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Okay, I’ll read yours now & leave feedback! :slight_smile:

Ours is kind of similar in a way! I can’t wait to read yours!!

I cant wait to read yours, too!

Hey I Just Started Doing R4R’s Again And I Would Love To Do One With You If You Like? Here’s My Story’s Info :blush::blush:

Title : Escaping My End
Genre : Drama, Romance, Action
Style : Ink
Episodes : 17(On Going)
Instagram : @alee_epiisode
Description : It’s Been A Year Since Arcelia Has Been Kidnapped By Fernando. That’s Until She And Her Son Are Rescued By The Alvarez Mafia, But She Soon Starts To Fall For The Leader’s Right Hand Man, Danilo. It’ll Be A Constant War For Her Between The Alvarez Mafia And Fernando. That Is Until She Learns The Truth Of Her Past That Everyone In Her Family Has Hidden From Her…

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6527715697033216

COVER

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Yes of course, I’ll read your story now :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :

Title : NEVERLAND
Author : Maggy

Genre : Romance/Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 9 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : Jiselle loves her grandmother’s intriguing fantasy story about a world called ‘Neverland’ that she wishes to discover. Will her wish comes true? Find out!

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4898085022859264

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sure, i’d love too :hugs: i’ll fill it out and read your story now !!

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Thank you for filling in :smiley:
Your story is now on my list! :smiley:

Hi Alexa !
I’m sasha Danverse,
If you interested in Mystery or Horror stories, you can read my story “ CHRISTMAS EVE ”.

Title : Christmas Eve. (Episode 5 is out!)
Author : Sasha Danverse.
Genre : Mystery, Horror, Thriller.
Summrary : In your school scary Christmas play “ CHRISTMAS EVE ” you really want the lead role! But your annoying “friend” is getting in the way of that! Could you stop her from ruining your Life ?
Even worse, you have to enter a whole new world! Because your drama teacher decided to take you to a HAUNTED HOUSE to rehearse! A house full of history. As much as possible you’re trying to hide the big secret you have!

Could you resist? Could you handle the fear ?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6544203906416640

War Cry By Alexa Kaela King

Run Time: 7m 28

  • In every scene, the dialogue is missing punctuation. This is mainly full stops at the end of sentences.
  • There is very little music or sound effects
Description

You inexplicitly [indirectly] speak in third person, and then change to second.

[They were] once a group of the world’s deadliest assassins. Now? [They’re] fighting the president’s war alongside the same special forces team who tried to lock them up.

1 & 2 - News - News Reporter & President

All three characters are missing punctuation in their dialogue.
The group of assassins, known as Asgata, have just killed the secretary of Zainia.

That’s why we’re looking for Asgata to help join in this war
That’s why we’re looking for Asgata to join us in this war.

3 - Track - Braxton & Saywer, Lennox, Elio & Cassian

What is he sitting on?

4 - Agasta - Naemi, Kye, Adeena, Gray, Charis & Divina

It’s our country, our home. We go to a vote
It’s our country, our home. We should [have a] vote.

Punctuation & Spelling:
Like always majoring wins.
Like always, majority wins.

Punctuation:
They haven’t done anything for us expect try and lock us up.
They haven’t done anything for us except, try and lock us up.

Direct Address:
Sorry Dera.
Sorry, Dera.

Homophones: words that sound alike and have different meanings and spellings.
As I was saying, this is there war. Not ours.
As I was saying, this is their war. Not ours.

Punctuation:
If that means training, then no.

Direct Address:
Excuse me, Dera, but…
But we need to vote now.
Why is but repeated?

Quoting:
I said, “I hold my vote”.
or
I said I’ll hold my vote.
The later would make more sense in my opinion.

5 - Agasta - Naemi, Kye, Adeena, Gray, Charis & Divina

Punctuation:
He has another side business that’s dirty.
He has another side business, that’s dirty.
He has another side business. That’s dirty.

Homophones:
Okay, but why am I dressed up like this?

I’ll try not too.
I’ll try not to.

Direct Address, Punctuation & Homophones:
Divina you’ll be standing outside pretending your drunk.
Divina, you’ll be standing outside, pretending you’re drunk.
Divina, you’ll be standing outside, pretending to be drunk.

When really we just there to keep watch.
When really we are just there to keep watch.

Punctuation - Rule 3b
And Naemi you keep watch and listen in on the police.
And, Naemi, you keep watch, and listen in on the police.
And, Naemi? You keep watch, and listen in on the police.

Punctuation - Rule 7a
Well you heard him
Well, you heard him.

6 - Agasta

Direct Address
Yes, Dera.

Looks like you got your hands full there Divina
Not saying this is incorrect, but generally “got” is used with “have” or “has”.
Looks like you’ve got your hands full there, Divina.
Looks like you have your hands full there, Divina.

Similarly with:
I got eyes on the target
I have eyes on the target.

Her placement is slightly off. When she stands up, she is in a different spot.

Direct Address
Nice shot, Dera.

7 - Market - Daniella, Granny

Granny, can you buy me some food?

I’m sorry darling, but I didn’t bring that much.
I’m sorry, darling, but I didn’t bring that much.

Yeah, please take it.

It’s okay, Naemi.

Call the others, NOW!!
Call the others. NOW!!

8 - Agasta - Divina, Kye, Dera, Gray

I’m sorry I wasn’t there, Dera.

Excuse me, Dera.

I said before I hold my vote.
I said, before, I hold my vote.
I said, before, “I hold my vote”.
I said, before, I’ll hold my vote.
Before, I said, “I hold my vote”.
Before, I said I’ll hold my vote.

Now, I agree.

When Dera exits, she walks on top of Kye.

Splashes

I like the splash. It fits the theme.


Reset the speechbubble placement at the end.

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thank you for reading it !! do you want me to read your story?

No problem. They are just grammatical things that I, personally, picked up on.

Unfortunately, my story isn’t published, yet.

But, I’m glad to help.

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Hello Lovely!

I would love to do a R4R with you!

Here`s mine:

Title: Mum Know`s Best

Description: Brainwashed teenager nicola has suffered from years of abuse at the hands of her mother will she be able to find a way out? Contains violence, self harm + CC choices matter tappable choices

Chapters:28 [FULLY COMPLETED]

Style: Ink

Genre: Drama

Important info :

If you would check out my story it would be great appreciated! I have worked on it for over a year now! Hopefully your love it as much As I do :slight_smile:

There is a lot of triggers in my story, Its a dramatic, Romantic, slight bit of thriller in and a slight bit of horror in as well

One reader quoted the following after reading all chapters “Its a classical version of flowers in the attic” I would also like to add even though the reader has said its like this story there is NO INCEST in my story And another: "I don`t have much to say about your story besides is absolutely Beautiful"


Trailer to my story

Here`s the authors and stories I would recommend
(They many also wanna do a R4R with you as well)

@samantha_episode_1 A heartbreak century

@Faith.episode.cats You are my sunshine

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okay! I’ll read your story in a couple minutes :hugs:

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Ok lovely, I will probably do it when im on my way to be, do you have insta? x

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