Inexperienced writers can use this to ask questions and seek help from ones’ who have been writing for a while.
For example, I need help writing dialogue without a character popping onto the screen. I want them to talk offscreen. However, this is a 1 zone background.
I’m a inexperienced writer so this is my question how the hell do I make them run onto the scene like I got them walking then start running on the spot
Well i want the character to run into scene, and this is what i do
INT. AUDITION STAGE - DAY @pan to zone 2
&ALEXIS enters from left to screen center
&ALEXIS is run_jog
&NOAH enters from left to screen left
&NOAH is run_athletic
But i want him to chase after her and its not working
INT. AUDITION STAGE - DAY @pan to zone 2
&ALEXIS enters from left to screen right in 3 AND ALEXIS is run_jog
&NOAH enters from left to screen left in 2 AND NOAH is run_athletic
For this you actually need spot directing.
Hope this is what you are looking for:
INT. AUDITION STAGE - DAY
&NOAH spot 0.965 -150 217 in zone 1 @ALEXIS spot 0.920 -99 214 in zone 1
&ALEXIS walks to spot 0.920 223 214 in zone 2 in 2 AND ALEXIS does it while run_jog
&NOAH walks to spot 0.965 87 217 in zone 2 in 2 AND NOAH does it while run_athletic @pause for 0.5 THEN pan to zone 2 in 1.5