Practiced Writers help the New!

Inexperienced writers can use this to ask questions and seek help from ones’ who have been writing for a while.

For example, I need help writing dialogue without a character popping onto the screen. I want them to talk offscreen. However, this is a 1 zone background.

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Place the character off screen.

So example:
@CHARACTER spot 1.280 -300 0

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Like @Baleigh_episode said

Then do it like this as a total this is an example:

@DAD spot 1.280 -300 0
DAD
I’m so sorry, Kay.

You can do this
NARRATOR (CHARACTER)
Come on!

This would look like the narrator bubble but it would have the name at the top like

CHARACTER
yasssss

I’m a inexperienced writer so this is my question how the hell do I make them run onto the scene like I got them walking then start running on the spot

You want the character to run in/to a spot?

cen you please explain in more detail what do you want?

because yu kinda mentioned 3 things in one

  1. run into scene

  2. first walk than run

  3. run on spot (not moving just making the run animation)

so what from it you need?

Well i want the character to run into scene, and this is what i do
INT. AUDITION STAGE - DAY
@pan to zone 2
&ALEXIS enters from left to screen center
&ALEXIS is run_jog
&NOAH enters from left to screen left
&NOAH is run_athletic
But i want him to chase after her and its not working

Do you mean like this?

INT. AUDITION STAGE - DAY
@pan to zone 2
&ALEXIS enters from left to screen right in 3 AND ALEXIS is run_jog
&NOAH enters from left to screen left in 2 AND NOAH is run_athletic

I guess you want them on the stage?

For this you actually need spot directing.
Hope this is what you are looking for:

INT. AUDITION STAGE - DAY
&NOAH spot 0.965 -150 217 in zone 1
@ALEXIS spot 0.920 -99 214 in zone 1
&ALEXIS walks to spot 0.920 223 214 in zone 2 in 2 AND ALEXIS does it while run_jog
&NOAH walks to spot 0.965 87 217 in zone 2 in 2 AND NOAH does it while run_athletic
@pause for 0.5 THEN pan to zone 2 in 1.5

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