Prashansa's Story Review Store! 😊

Hey peeps,
Prashansa is back y’all. And I decided to open my review shop. So people can get feedback before they send out their story. Or when people want to know how the Community feels about it.


  • No damn drama. If I see you causing problems. I will kick your ass out of this thread.
  • You need to fill out the form below. If you don’t I will not review your story.
  • These things take time. I will try to get to everyone. You might have to wait up to a month.
  • No inappropriate nonsense. I don’t want any clogging of this thread. And I don’t want any nasty remarks. And everyone by now. Should know what that means.
  • I am the only reviewer in this thread. Since I made it.
  • If I sound rude when I give you your feedback. Don’t take it personally. Write what you love no matter what. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Title of Story:
Author name:
Story link:

Woo! You made it this far. If you would like to read my story here it is. Please read it, I would love you forever if you did.

Waiting list:
@JannahJackson (Tribe of Malapinchi)
@RainbowCat (Dreams and Nightmares)
@WillowBear (Marionette)
@MKiara (Girls Just Wanna Have Fun)
@Sunset_Shimmer (The Story of Avalon)
@foxxiiii13 (What Was Missing)


Thank you for doing this! I think you’ve read my story though a read for read before, but if you could give it a brutally honest review it would be greatly appreciated! :grin::sparkling_heart:
Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Style: Limelight
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.

Shortened Link:

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Alright. I will. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Could you review mine?
Story Name - Mi Princesa Hermosa
Author Name - Ash.Epi
Genre - Romance
Style - Ink
Description - When Tori runs away to New York from a bad home will she find love or danger? Or both? Tori’s life will take a turn when she meets Brandon Santiago, a man with a dark past. NO CC
Cover -
Link -
Episodes Released - 7

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Yes. But you have to fill out the form.

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Title of Story: Capture the Moment
Author name: Karlon Artis
Genre: Comedy
Style: Limelight
Description: Takoda is a photographer who inspires to become freelance and expand his portfolio. Can he snapshot his way to success?
Story link:

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Feel free to check out my story.

Title of story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author name: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure/Mystery/Thriller/Horror
Story style: Secret Surprise :wink:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you make sense of the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6

My episodes are rather LONGGGG… 20 mins about there just to give a heads up.

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Thanks for taking the time to review stories! :slight_smile:

Title of Story: Dreams and Nightmares
Author name: Dreamer
Genre: Romance/Drama
Style: Ink
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Story link:

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I’d love it if you could review my story:
Title: Marionette
Author: Emily
Genre: Drama
Style: LL
Description: Life as a teenager is fun right: partying and making the most of childhood? Well not for Isabelle. She didn’t get the teenage future she was hoping for. CC
Cover: Marionette%20Cover

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Hi hope you’ll enjoy and review my story!

My story: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

Author: MKG

Genre: Romantic Comedy / some Drama

Story style: Limelight

Description: Every girl has their own story. Kiara, Willow, Samantha, and Sooyoung are 4 very different and unique girls. Follow them as they grow up and discover first love, pain and what true friendship means.

4 different races, sexualities and multiple love interests for each girl.


Episodes: 4

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You have to send the link again @MKiara

So sorry about that >.<
Here’s it is :

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Here is my story :slight_smile: :slight_smile:
Story Title: Blind Date with Millionaire
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance
Author: Senada
Published : 3 Chapters
You went on a blind date with a handsome young millionaire. What will happen when you wake up in the same bed?(Romance&Drama)


Hey, Shana :blush: Do you review unpublished stories as well?

Of course!

Thanks for taking the time to do this :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Title of Story: The Story of Avalon
Author name: LynnTheAngel
Genre: Fantasy/Romance/Adventure
Style: Limelight
Description: The prince is on a journey to rescue his beloved Marabella after she is taken. On the way, he’ll team up with a pirate, genie and fairy. Leaving him to wonder who is his true love?
Story link:

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Can I have the link?

Okay, I edited it.

Title of Story: What Was Missing
Author name: Foxx
Genre: Romance / Slice of Life
Style: Ink
Description: The story takes place from Reason’s point of view. He’s a teenage boy who spends the majority of his time with his best friend, Light, and the two come to the conclusion that they’ve fallen into a rut of doing the same stuff all the time. Fallon, an interesting and quirky girl, moves in next door and the three begin spending time together. The boys quickly realize that Fallon is the dose of fun they’d been looking for, though it may be more than Reason had originally bargained for as he finds himself struggling to maintain a platonic relationship with her. All main characters can be customized.
Story link:

I would love an honest review–also, if you can find any errors (grammatical, coding, etc), that would be greatly appreciated! Also, any areas where the directing is lacking or that I missed something! :heart_eyes:

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