PREVIEW: Ride or die

I finally finished it! The 1st chapter of Ride or die is finished. Would anyone like to preview it? If you do here’s the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5214695081771008
Give feedback if you can! Tell me what I can improve on

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Imma read now!

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That was really good! I can’t wait for more chapters as well!

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Thank you! Any feedback?

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It was really good the only thing I would say is just the overlay for the blanket when she woke up was in the wrong layer. But honestly it was all really good. Even the character development I wouldn’t have even thought this was your first story :rofl:

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I missed you.

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I missed you too faith!

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Aww! Can we PM?

Sure!

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Yes!

Directing is pretty good so far. One thing for me though is that when you change your mind on a hairstyle, you have to restart picking an outfit before the hairstyle. It’s a little inconvenient, but it’s cute

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Thank you! And I couldn’t find a way to fix that

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