Projectiverse R4Rs/Review-for-Reviews

So, I’m currently working on a story focusing on the art of dance. :dancer:
I don’t know when I’ll release it, but it may be a while since I’m still in the outlining process for this dance story. In the meantime, be sure to check out my other stories that are published and completed. Also, (since the previous threads got archived), I’m willing to do read-for-reads or review-for-reviews. If you read any of my stories (you have to do this first), then I will read yours and hopefully provide feedback for your story.
I’ll try to read the same amount of chapters from your story as you’ve read from any 1 of mine. Meaning if you read 3 chapters from any 1 story, I’ll read 3 chapters of your story. If you read 9 chapters, I’ll also read 9 chapters.

My stories are below.

Title: Projection!
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Comedy
Description: Harry Stevens is looking for his big break in the world of musical theatre. But what will it take to get there?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6046875219918848
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Title: Publicity Problems
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Drama
Description: Samantha Xanders struggles with her fame after receiving unwanted publicity. Can she overcome the challenges of stardom?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4689222272417792
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Title: Video Game Champion
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Action
Description: You are a gamer hoping to win the video game championship. Can you defeat your rival after a 5-year losing streak?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5634634595172352
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Title: Capture the Moment
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Comedy
Description: Takoda is a photographer who inspires to become freelance and expand his portfolio. Can he snapshot his way to success?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5666941859397632
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Title: Thespian Theatrical
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Romance
Description: Estefania Hermoso loves theatre and has a passion for it. But what happens when she finds out that a girl she likes has lost her passion for theatre?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5772043488395264
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My Instagram is @kartis.episode

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Hi! I’m up for a R4R with you. Do you have any preference within your stories or should I choose one myself ?

Here are mine, you can choose one!

DEADLY TRIAL
Genre: Thriller mostly
Description: Kate wakes up in a nightmarish place… little does she know she is not alone. A deadly trial awaits her and the six other suspects. Who’s guilty?

THE WRONG MATCH
Genre: Romance & Comedy
Description: Married at first sight, uh? Seemed like a good idea until Maya found out that the perfect match she was supposed to be with turned out to be everything but what she dreamed of.

You can pick any one of my stories.

r4r? Feel free to tell me ur opinion if you want

Lost Summer Love

Crazy love. Wacky friends. Unnecessary drama. How will Evan and Sierra make it through this crazy thing called, life

R4Rs are open. Let me know when you’ve read my story.

I should probably make this clear, in case I didn’t in the original post. If you’re interested in doing a read-for-read with me, you must read my story first.

No ghosting!

There were too many times where I’ve done R4Rs and the other person never read my story even though I read theirs and sent screenshots.

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Hi kahotshot! I’d like to do a read-for-read with you. I’ll get started on one of your stories first and PM you a screenshot when I’m done. I’ve also been burned by people flaking out of R4Rs so I get your trepidation.

My work can be found here:

It’s called What’s Your Emergency?, by Sathael. We’re following an anti-romantic human train-wreck and 999 call operator who hates that one cocky police officer on her team. But 999 emergencies have a funny way of changing your world.

Hey. I read your story.

Also, as a heads up, thanks to the updated Episode Guidelines, curse words have to be censored.

Yeah I know. Thanks!

Hello, I just read your story “Publicity Problems” and here’s my review.

PLOT: This story read more like a compilation of sketches rather than a full blown story to me.
I know first episodes are introductions but I thought there wasn’t anything exciting happening in the plot. I like the drama/cliffhanger with Alice at the end but it felt out of character since two scenes ago Alice said paparazzi would make up anything? 3/5
Directing: No directing errors from what I could see, but nothing advanced either. 3.5/5
Grammar&Spelling: No grammar or spelling errors so this is a huge plus! Sometimes I can’t get through a story because of them so kudos to you. 5/5
Choices; There were a couple choices that impacted how the characters reacted so that was nice! I don’t know if they will carry onto later episodes but it was still very nice. 4/5

Overall: Generally a good story but I felt like it’s missing something. The scenes felt disconnected and too short and I was unable to truly empathize with Sam. There are so many rumors about celebrities that “copying a song” felt really run-of-the-mill for a rumor. The plot is lacking the excitement that would push me to read more. Still, good story to kill time to.

Total: 7/10

Please give me a brutally honest review as well!
Title : The Divine Stars
Summary : What if the only chance to save your mother meant entering a game of death where you’re competing against 10 other contestants? Complete your missions and live. Or fail and die.
Genre : Fantasy
Episodes Available : 5
Instagram : @realthyla
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5990672101605376

Hey. I read your story. My feedback for you would be to work on your zooms. There were times where the camera zooms in on a character, but the character is not centered in the frame. Sometimes, they would also be out of frame as well.

Also, at one point, I saw 2 background characters making out, but they were spot directed too far apart from each other.

Read-for-reads are still open.

I should probably also mention that I’ll try to read the same amount of chapters from your story as you’ve read from any 1 of mine. Meaning if you read 3 chapters from any 1 story, I’ll read 3 chapters of your story. If you read 9 chapters, I’ll also read 9 chapters.

I have another story if you wanna do another r4r

Sure. We can do another R4R.

I’d be willing to do a R4R with you! I’ll get started on Capture the Moment now:blush:
Episode Nickname : ARC
Story Title : Wanderer of Fallen Fate
Story Genre : Romance
Description : With the ability to see the deadly fate of anyone she touches, Phoenix attempts to prevent the untimely death of a handsome stranger.
Style : Limelight
Options : CC, Choices matter.
Episodes : 4
Instagram : @arc.episode
Link : [http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4522080529088512]

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I’ll SS when I’m done

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Finished

Thanks. Just finished your story as well.

Title : Hannah Miler’s Mystery
Author: Remone
Story genre :Mystery
Story style :lime light
Description: Hannah Miler was brutally killed in the woods.Will Ser be able to solve the mystery of Hannah miler’s death and will able to find the killer ?.And how is Ser related to Hannah.(CC)


image Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6311583539331072 1
IG: remonevov6.0