Hey, I’m new here, and this is my first story. I’m in need of opinions to know how should I continue.
Name: Feud: The beginning of a war.
Author: Girl Creating
STYLE: limelight
GENRE: Fantasy, adventure, romance.
3 chapters so far.
Here is the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6675423869861888
Description: She thought her love life was the only trouble she had, before finding herself inside a war among powerful creatures. Will she save the world, and her love life as well?
Uncover the truth about some new ‘mythical’ creatures and another part of the world.
You get to choose how MC deals with events and love choices. The ending will depend on your choices.
Let me know what you think about my story, and if somebody would like me to read their story, just send me a message and I will 