like the title states, i will read a few chapters of your story and give you constructive feedback - i’ll definitely give you some positive comments and possibly things you could improve to make your story even better!
simply comment your:
amount of episodes:
features: (eg, tappable, cc, mini games) *optional
i have unlimited passes rn so i’ll make sure to read and pm you after! <3
I’m reading Love you NOT. Check it out: https://episode.app.link/Qp52OwG4yV
Please read my story just uploaded it yesterday . It’s my first story so it might have some errors pls neglect
Title: Bad Behavior
Author: Aaliyah Ali
Episodes: 5 (more to come)
Summary: How will Alana, Lucas, Ryan, and Rachel survive their past and conquer their future…
If bad behavior follows them everywhere they go?
cc, and choices available!
Title: Adventurous: Project Humanity
Description: In a world without sadness, your father starts a little project. What happens when you take part in it? Will you find your place in a world with new possibilities, new feelings?
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon)
i would LOVE some feedback if you don’t mind! thanks so much!
Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller)
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to…
Chapters: 5 (More to come)
Full CC/Choices Matter/Point System/Advanced Directing!
My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Hey! Thank you for offering this. I just published my adventurous contest story, so I’d really love some feedback.
Title: Adventurous: Our Beautiful Chaos
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5639497557016576
Episodes: 1, 2 and 3 with more coming after the contest
Genre: Adventure, with some romance and comedy
Features: CC yourself, mini games, choices that matter (!), tappable overlays…
App description: When you go on the adventure of a lifetime, you did not expect a handsome man to tag along. Facing all kind of challanges, what is going to happen? You decide.
More description lol: You’re a talented girl with a great job, but are stuck in the boring everyday routine. When you suddenly get an offer to go on an adventure, you just can’t say no. And maybe the handsome man tagging along also isn’t that bad? However, if you want to stay on board of this adventure, you have to make the right choices. Will you succeed? Find out!
Sneak peeks have been posted on my instagram, @episodesbymaria !
Thanks for the thread
Story name : The Star Necklace
Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity
Episodes : 7 more coming soon
Hey i would love some feedback on my story!
TITLE: Be careful with the angel (6 chapters)
MAIN CHARACTERS: Amara & Mateo
DESCRIPTION: After spending her life isolated from the world for 20 years, Amara made the brave decision of escaping from her captures. The night of her escape, a brave young man named Mateo, saved her from one of the guards that tried to take her back. She doesn’t stick around to meet him or thank him. Since that night her life begins to take a turn for the best. All thanks to Mateo. Come find out if they ever reunite. If so, do you think there would be any obstacles that will keep them apart?
My story is:
Description: It’s about a place where everyone is perfect and without feelings or emotions. When someone starts to feel something, they will be send to a hell of a prison or they will die.
Will they change their way to live?
Episodes: 4 (more episodes will be coming soon)
Features CHOICES MATTER, POINT SYSTEM, TIMED CHOICES, TWO DIFFERENT ENDINGS, CC
Thank you for this thread! I would love a review
Story: Adventurous: Time Immune
Summary: When loud-mouth Mikea sets off on a road-trip with YOU, it becomes harder to hide the truth of your origin… oh, and that you are an immortal cyborg.
CC, POC, LGBT, multiple endings
Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Thanks for doing this!!
Title: Adventurous: All Aboard
Features: Tappable minigames, choose the love interest’s gender (and choose whether to pursue romance at all), points system, choices matter, animated backgrounds, etc
Description: When a gift from your Gramps puts you on a train with an unknown destination, it’s up to you to make the most of it.
Sometimes the journey IS the adventure.
Title: Indomitable Vampire
Episodes: 3 (MORE COMING!)
Features: CHOICES MATTER!!
Description: What happens when bad boy vampire Silas Wilder, can’t use his powers on you so, he has to use his charms, the old school way. Will, he be able to control himself, or will you be able to get inside his head?
INCLUDES ART SCENES!!
Thanks for this thread, here’s my story! :
Title: Dying Love
Brief Description: I loved you the moment I laid eyes on you. …But as they say, all good things must come to an end. Art scenes inside.
I would love to have a feedback
Title: The Shadow and the Hunter
Episodes: 6 (ongoing!!!)
Description: The shadow and the Hunter! Enemies finally meet but do they know who the other one is? Who is stronger and what happens if a dangerous love affair develops?
story name: Alone Till There Was You
amount of episodes:10 and ongoing
description: Summer is a young mom that believes her life is turning around when she meets Spencer but what happens when she finds out he lied?
features: (eg, tappable, cc, mini-games) *optional
I do have some trouble with grammar as English is not first language, Hope you enjoy.
Would love to get some feedback from ya
Tittle: Taken: Dead or Alive (INK)
Description: Rose & Sophia Beaumont are tough to handle. But what if one is taken and another one has been targeted to kill? Will they able to stay strong? Or love will get in the way?
Hello! This is my story. Thank you so much for doing reviews! (anyone who read this hmu if you want r4r!)
Author: Diana Dee
Instagram: @dianadee.ep (let’s follow each other! and support each other story!)
Genre: Mystery, Fiction, Drama
Episodes: 3 at the moment
Darkness has come, and it’s up to Anne to solved it. Little did she know, the root is closer than she thinks. She has to sacrifice a lot, including her love ones. (Choices Matter, CC later on future chapter, Relationship Point, Different Ending)
Hey there!This is my first story ever and I’m excited for feedback.
TITLE :The bewitched land’s bracelet
STYLE : Limelight
GENRE : Fantasy (and romance too)
EPISODES : 4 posted today, I will upload more soon.
DESCRIPTION : Tatiana inherits an old bracelet from her great grandmother and with it she gets magic powers.She starts a new life full of adventures,dangers,victories and of course love!
I have literally 0 reads so this would be VERY helpful XOXO