Promote your story & get some feedback! [closed for now]

like the title states, i will read a few chapters of your story and give you constructive feedback - i’ll definitely give you some positive comments and possibly things you could improve to make your story even better!
simply comment your:
story name:
amount of episodes:
features: (eg, tappable, cc, mini games) *optional

i have unlimited passes rn so i’ll make sure to read and pm you after! <3


I’m reading Love you NOT. Check it out:

Instagram -dazzglitters
Please read my story just uploaded it yesterday . It’s my first story so it might have some errors pls neglect


Title: Bad Behavior
Author: Aaliyah Ali
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 5 (more to come)
Summary: How will Alana, Lucas, Ryan, and Rachel survive their past and conquer their future…
If bad behavior follows them everywhere they go?
cc, and choices available!
Style: Limelight



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Here’s mine:
Title: Adventurous: Project Humanity
Author: Dreamer
Genre: Adventure
Style: Limelight
Description: In a world without sadness, your father starts a little project. What happens when you take part in it? Will you find your place in a world with new possibilities, new feelings?
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon)
Instagram: dreamer.episode

i would LOVE some feedback if you don’t mind! thanks so much!

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller)
Style: Limelight
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to…



Chapters: 5 (More to come)

Full CC/Choices Matter/Point System/Advanced Directing!:blush:

My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6


Hey! Thank you for offering this. :slight_smile: I just published my adventurous contest story, so I’d really love some feedback.

Title: Adventurous: Our Beautiful Chaos
Story link:
Author: Maria
Episodes: 1, 2 and 3 with more coming after the contest
Genre: Adventure, with some romance and comedy
Style: Ink
Features: CC yourself, mini games, choices that matter (!), tappable overlays…
App description: When you go on the adventure of a lifetime, you did not expect a handsome man to tag along. Facing all kind of challanges, what is going to happen? You decide.
More description lol: You’re a talented girl with a great job, but are stuck in the boring everyday routine. When you suddenly get an offer to go on an adventure, you just can’t say no. And maybe the handsome man tagging along also isn’t that bad? However, if you want to stay on board of this adventure, you have to make the right choices. Will you succeed? Find out!

Story Cover:

Sneak peeks have been posted on my instagram, @episodesbymaria ! :heartpulse:

Love, Maria

Thanks for the thread

Story name : The Star Necklace

Author: Mayah

Genere: Drama

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

Style: ink

Episodes : 7 more coming soon

Hey i would love some feedback on my story!

TITLE: Be careful with the angel (6 chapters)

AUTHOR: Nora.O_episodes

IG: Nora.O_episodes

GENRE: Romance/Drama


STYLE: LimeLight

DESCRIPTION: After spending her life isolated from the world for 20 years, Amara made the brave decision of escaping from her captures. The night of her escape, a brave young man named Mateo, saved her from one of the guards that tried to take her back. She doesn’t stick around to meet him or thank him. Since that night her life begins to take a turn for the best. All thanks to Mateo. Come find out if they ever reunite. If so, do you think there would be any obstacles that will keep them apart?

My story is:
Title: Equals
Author: Laurales
Description: It’s about a place where everyone is perfect and without feelings or emotions. When someone starts to feel something, they will be send to a hell of a prison or they will die.
Will they change their way to live?
Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 4 (more episodes will be coming soon)

Thank you for this thread! I would love a review :heart:
Story: Adventurous: Time Immune
Genre: Adventure
Summary: When loud-mouth Mikea sets off on a road-trip with YOU, it becomes harder to hide the truth of your origin… oh, and that you are an immortal cyborg.
CC, POC, LGBT, multiple endings

Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED

Thanks for doing this!!

Title: Adventurous: All Aboard

Author: J.J

Episodes: 3

Style: Limelight

Features: Tappable minigames, choose the love interest’s gender (and choose whether to pursue romance at all), points system, choices matter, animated backgrounds, etc :slight_smile:

Description: When a gift from your Gramps puts you on a train with an unknown destination, it’s up to you to make the most of it.
Sometimes the journey IS the adventure.


Title: Indomitable Vampire
Author: Blue
Style: Ink
Episodes: 3 (MORE COMING!)
Description: What happens when bad boy vampire Silas Wilder, can’t use his powers on you so, he has to use his charms, the old school way. Will, he be able to control himself, or will you be able to get inside his head?



Thanks for this thread, here’s my story! :sparkling_heart::
Instagram: ellec.writes
Title: Dying Love
Genre: Romance/Drama
Brief Description: I loved you the moment I laid eyes on you. …But as they say, all good things must come to an end. Art scenes inside.

I would love to have a feedback :blush:
Insta: @episode.reema

My story:
Title: The Shadow and the Hunter
Author: Reema
Genre: Drama
Style: ink
Episodes: 6 (ongoing!!!)
Description: The shadow and the Hunter! Enemies finally meet but do they know who the other one is? Who is stronger and what happens if a dangerous love affair develops?


story name: Alone Till There Was You
author: Bethany
amount of episodes:10 and ongoing
style: INK
description: Summer is a young mom that believes her life is turning around when she meets Spencer but what happens when she finds out he lied?
genre: Romance
features: (eg, tappable, cc, mini-games) *optional

I do have some trouble with grammar as English is not first language, Hope you enjoy.

Would love to get some feedback from ya :innocent:

Tittle: Taken: Dead or Alive (INK)
Author: xoRoséxo
Genre: Drama/Action
Chapters: 14
Description: Rose & Sophia Beaumont are tough to handle. But what if one is taken and another one has been targeted to kill? Will they able to stay strong? Or love will get in the way?
Instagram: xoroses.episode

Hello! This is my story. Thank you so much for doing reviews! (anyone who read this hmu if you want r4r!)

Title: Lacuna
Author: Diana Dee
Instagram: @dianadee.ep (let’s follow each other! and support each other story!)
Genre: Mystery, Fiction, Drama
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 3 at the moment


Darkness has come, and it’s up to Anne to solved it. Little did she know, the root is closer than she thinks. She has to sacrifice a lot, including her love ones. (Choices Matter, CC later on future chapter, Relationship Point, Different Ending)


Cover :

Hey there!This is my first story ever and I’m excited for feedback.
TITLE :The bewitched land’s bracelet
STYLE : Limelight
GENRE : Fantasy (and romance too)
EPISODES : 4 posted today, I will upload more soon.
DESCRIPTION : Tatiana inherits an old bracelet from her great grandmother and with it she gets magic powers.She starts a new life full of adventures,dangers,victories and of course love!
:heartpulse: I have literally 0 reads so this would be VERY helpful XOXO