It’s all good. it just might take me a while to get to your story:)
Hey, I would really appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on my first story!
TITLE: Halfbloods
AUTHOR: Lynn
GENRE: Fantasy, Adventure
DESCRIPTION: Megara is a Demigod, but she doesn’t now it yet, follow her on her journey to become the most powerful Halfgod
Chapters out: 4 Chapters
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4889906489131008
Thank you!
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It might take me a few hours to get to your story because the thread is filled with story’s I haven’t read yet
That’s totally fine! Thank you I really appreciate this!
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Thank you so much! It makes me so happy when I hear that people like my story. I do know how to make people smaller. Since then I’ve gotten much better at directing and coding. I hope you enjoy it. There’s a big crazy surprise at the end.
Can’t wait to see what happens 
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Hehe. Thank for reading it. Have you gotten any further with the story?
I will once I finish reading the other stories that want to be read for feedback:)
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Thanks
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Thank you! I’m happy to hear that!
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I saw nothing wrong with the first chapter of your story. It was very entertaining to read. I’ll definitely keep reading:)
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I love gang stories with a passion. Your story description is really different from the other episode gang stories. I enjoyed reading and will keep reading:)
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thank you! 
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I really love the first chapter of you story. It was very interesting. I saw nothing wrong 
I’ll keep reading when I get a chance 
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I really loved the first chapter! It was so mysterious. I didn’t see any spelling errors, i’ll keep reading when I can
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I love your story and I saw nothing wrong with it (I read only the first chapter) I can tell this story is gonna be sad, or I could be wrong. 
I love your story sm (I read the first chapter) I’m really impressed about how great your directing is for just starting to use episode. I love that later in the story you bring up mental health topics because it kinda explains how serious mental health can be. I want to be a clinical psychologist, so mental health is very interesting to me.
The first episode was so good. I saw nothing wrong with it, and I think that once I start reading the story when I get a chance, i’ll be addicted . The scene where Jasmine’s parents died made me tear up a bit.
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I love your story sm. The plot of the first episode is unique. I’ll keep reading
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