Hey everyone! I’d like everyone to use this thread to comment below their stories for me to read.
I am also willing to do a R4R! If anyone wants to do that I will provide feedback plus story help besides just reading it.
(Limelight is preferred)
While you here, I would love it you reviewed my story as well!
I would love to do a R4R with you!
Title: Serendipity
Genre: Romance/Drama
Style: Limelight
CC: Yes
IG: cindyrella.episode
Description: You’re in an unhappy relationship with a manipulative boyfriend. What happens when you cross paths with a sexy stranger with a complicated past? Can he bring changes to your life?
Of course I’d love to do one! I’ll read it tonight and provide screenshots and feedback when I’m finished. I would love if you could do the same Thanks!! @ima.gia.nation
Thank you for this!
Title: Queer: Daisy
Author: Bertha
Genre: Romance
Instagram: @bertha_episode
Full sinopsis: Kristen’s an art student that has to present a project in 22 days, but she lacks of inspiration. You’ll need to help her through the minigames to gain that inspiration. On the process, she meets someone that may help her overcome this block. Successfully completing the project depends on you, and so is the ending!
1 LI, L-CC, LGBTQI+, Minigames, Point system, different endings
Cover:
Hey again! I’d liked the concept of your story, ‘Princess Troublemaker!’ Your characters were inclusive and unique and I think you have a pretty good plot running.
However, I did find that your episodes were a little short. You may want to make them longer next time. I also think you didn’t need to use as many sound effects as you did.
Lastly, I think you didn’t need to transition with so many different backgrounds. They made the story a tiny bit choppy.
Anyways, you have a really interesting story and I can’t wait to read more!
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4558247446773760
Description: Follow Detective Hudson who has spent their life trying to put their family’s tragic history behind them until a new serial killer threatens to uncover the past. M/F MC, 4 LI, CM
Author: Elle
Genre: Mystery
CC: Limited
Choices matter and there are multiple points systems!
My Instagram: @eliseclairmont.episode
Hi just finished reading your story and so far it’s a really cute story It does make me want to get to the underlying issues with Katie and how much of her past is really effecting her.
Here’s my ss:
Hey again! Your story was great! I think it has a good plot with a really interesting story. I do wish, however, that the episodes were longer and that you would be able to customize the love interest. I’d also recommend looking out for spelling, because there were a couple mistakes.
Anyways, your story already has amazing potential and I can’t wait to binge read it some more! You did an amazing job for a first coder!
Thanks so much for reading!