Here’s my story link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5935056191815680
I could need your honest opinions on it 
but not judging my directing skills please, like i said its a mobile creation story. Just wanted giving a try and so if you guys want me to continue the story, I’d gladly continue and this time around with the advanced features on the next coming episodes 
thank you. 
it’s a read for read so share me your story links too