I have made some (major?) changes to the first episode. Derek is far less I need to give this male a restraining order, and more adorably awkward. I have been adding more flesh to the breakup and the aesthetics of the story has improved greatly.
I will be posting screenshots of a brand new first episode. Any new readers, do not despair (HAHAHAHAHAHA I am hilarious) - you are more than free to read my story but do note, I will be making some adjustments to the story and adding a bit more comedy to lighten things up (I lied, it’s not comedy - it’s just there to make me giggle lol).