Hey!! Check out my first story! I’d really appreciate any criticism or opinions or tips you may have! This is all new for me so anything does help! And I just want my story to reach its fullest potential!
GENRE: Fantasy
TITLE: Merry Memories
STYLE: ink / classic
SMALL DESCRIPTION: Michelle Frost is in for a whirlwind adventure when she wakes up from a fall she had & while trying to remember some memories, does she happen to find love with a mystery guy?
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4867787091869696
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Can we do a read for read? My story is called DD: Unpredictable love
Hello ,
We could do a read for read if you want ?
But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form
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Here is the description of my story
Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy
Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?
Of course! I’ll be sure to check it out today and let you know what I think!
Also, My story “Merry Memories” does have 3 chapters as a little heads up as to how much you’ll be reading and please let me know what you think on it as well!
hi! your story sounds interesting so I am interested in doing read for read
My story is called You, Me And The Beat
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hope you’ll enjoy
Thank You, I’ll start reading your episode and show you a screenshot when I’ve read all three episodes
Sure! I’ll be sure to check it out as soon as I can today! Also went ahead and filled out the form for you so it’s all set and ready to go! Thanks so much again!
Awesome! I’ll be sure to check it out! and if you’d like I’m always open to feedback and or opinions you might have on making improvements and making sure it can be the best it can!
Read and loved your story! I really enjoyed the story line/plot, but also how you gave the reader options that allowed them to be a part of the story as well!
Also here’s a screenshot as well, just so you know that I did indeed read it!
Thank you
I’ll give you a feedback when i’m done reading yours
xo
I loved your story and I believe it has potential of becoming a very popular story! The only thing I recommend is to give the reader more choices and to create bigger cliff hangers so the reader continues to read your story
Hi, are you up for a r4r? Your story seems really interesting !!
Author: Bonnie Dundee
Author Insta: @bonniedundee.epi
Title: Game Of Disguises
Style: Ink
Chapters: 6
Genre: Drama/Action
Brief Description: Two best friends have fun by disguising themselves as other people and attend luxurious and fancy events, but what happens when they find themselves in the wrong place and at the wrong time?
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Of course! I’ll be more than happy to take a look at it and send you over a screenshot and let you know what I think! Your story seems really interesting too!
Tysm x is 3 episodes ok? I’ll read 3 of your obviously
Yeah, 3 Episodes is no problem at all! I’ll be sure to take a look at it today!
Thank you so much!! That really does just mean so much to me honestly!
And totally! I’ll be sure to add those suggestions into my work so that way I can improve my story! I really appreciate you critiques!