Promoting my first story


Please review my story I know the directing is bad I’m currently looking for someone to fix it but if you could tell me what you think of the plot that would be nice.


When you have the character talking instead of the narrator, all you have to do for the name of the character is
Whatever you want them to say
Maybe as she is telling you everything have it change in the story showing you what’s going on along with her telling you. Also it would look better in my opinion, if you have animations of them talking every time they talk… I’m not a pro, but if you need to know how to put them in spots and coding I can help…
The plot was okay I only read the 1st episode…


Thanks for your opinion and yes I do need help with coding.


What in all would you like help with… I can show you one of my episodes where I did the coding I can message it to you maybe it can help.


Yeah I don’t have a computer so I can’t really code


O your doing it on a phone??




:I will review your story! My story is called Alleyway, just released! check it out for me:) (


o okay ya I’m no good with the phone sorry


That’s ok


Ok here’s the link to my story




we can do r4r
this is my story.
Your life was normal until you met two bad boys who both like you. People go missing, you get anonymous texts, family and boy drama and so much more. Customization available.


Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :

Title : Jungle Fever
Author : Maggy

Genre : Romance/Drama
Style : Ink
Number of episodes : 8 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A bad boy Prince with a lot of ego and a womanizer, gets lost in the middle of the Jungle and meets a fierce African Princess called Maya. Will he handle the change of environment?
Link :




Name: The Ember Moon Pack


Vampires, werewolves, and hybrids – who will you side with? Hey, Hybrid Queen, hurry up. War is on its way.
Customizable Characters, LGBTQ+, 5 Endings, Choices Matter, Music

Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight


Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:



Title- Hidden Behind Lies…
Genre- Romance but will be abit of action…
Description- What happens when your dad has a past and it finally catches up to you? Nothing is what it seems….

story link_


I would like to promote my story :slight_smile:

Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Chapters: 4
Style: Limelight
Genre: drama
Description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?


Hi all :grinning:,

Hurray! :tada::confetti_ball: I’ve just published my first story! :dancer:

Name: Sealed with a Kiss! :kiss:
Author: D.G.S.
Genre: Romance :couplekiss_man_woman:
Total number of episodes: :two::four:
Status: Story is complete.:wink:
Story Type: Episode Original
Story Style: Episode Ink

Description: One night Emily Brown :woman:t2: meets the top hero of Hollywood, Dylan Reed :adult:t2:. He is the most eligible bachelor of California, a dangerous womanizer with seducing-ly killer looks :heart_eyes:. Can she be able to resist his charm or will she fall for him :thinking: ? See how it is to be a lover of the top hero of Hollywood, when the whole country is after him and he after you! :revolving_hearts:

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Please read the story :slight_smile: and share with your friends :two_men_holding_hands::couple::two_women_holding_hands: