I will message you my review and screenshots
Thank You So Much
I Truly Appreciate It.
Feedback
@chicalondres
Before I start please donāt take this too heart Iām not the best writer myself okay
Positives
1. I like the relationship between the Mia and the MC
2. I like how we can Customise the MC
3. The storyline seems interesting
Constructive Criticism
1. The first episode should be the most important episode, but I spent that on just customisations and this follows until the 4th episode where the story actually starts. The reader may feel itās a waste of a pass. I donāt even know what the story is going to be about if I had not read the description.
2. Here is a link where this can help you customise the family and your character in just one episode so you can get a bit of the story in.
Itās from Joseph Evans - Episodelife
3. Personal opinion I donāt really mind what the best friend looks like or her little sister so I donāt need to customise her.
My little criticism was mainly on customisation so donāt take it to heart too much. Iām just expressing my views.
Surprisingly I really like your story honestly. As I tend not to gravitate towards that kind of fantasy genre. I really like the characters in the story especially okay I canāt spell his name so Iām going to call him A (fallen angel guy). I like the story line and I really canāt wait for more episodes.
Aww thank you so much that means a lot! Iām glad you are enjoying the story so far !
Itās truly okay
Thanks for the feedback
Iām still in the process of your story
Iād be willing to do a read for read with you if youāre interested!
Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: āAnd thatās how weāll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.ā
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960
We can do a r4r. Iām always interested in discovering new stories ! I will start reading yours tonight
Great, Iāll read yours as well <3
@T.Sofia
Hi, Iād love to do a R4R with you!
Hereās my story info!
Title : The Murders at Riverview University
Author : Heather
Genre : Mystery/Horror
Description : Itās your first day of college. New, bright opportunities await you, but thereās just one problem. Students are being murdered, one by oneā¦ Will you be the next victim?
Story Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5582848511770624
I would like that i will start your story tonight or tomorrow
Hi everyone!
My name is Ariel and I recently just posted my first story!
Story Info:
Title: Matched
Genre: Drama (but also Romance/Comedy)
Style : Ink
Description: Jade Lyons is the girl guys fall for, but she never falls for them. Things change when she moves back to her hometown and meets Mr. Popular, Caden Skylar. Has Jade met her match?
[This is a typical high school drama type of story but I also wanted to add more emphasis on the friends too rather than just the MC and the love interest - although that is obviously prevalent too!]
# of Episodes: 10 (and there will be more coming!)
(Also my episodes are a bit on the longer side, because personally, I like to have my episodes a bit longer rather than shorter - just a heads up!)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4597015739695104
Instagram: @episode_ariel (just made it!)
Cover:
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I impulse bought unlimited passes for this month LOL woops so I am ALWAYS down for a r4r!
message me if youāre interested <3
Iāll match how many chapters you are willing to read of mine!
Title: MC: Supernatural Connection
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6124557439139840
Author: Meliah
Genre: Romance/Drama/Sci-fi
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 3 (More will be published soon.)
Description: Theyāre connected to each other and it all starts with an explosion when Alani bumps into a stranger. Somehow theyāre in contact. This connection isnāt naturalā¦itās supernatural!
Instagram: @episodewriter31
Iām @thereclusewriter on Instagram.
Here is my most current story, a part of the Creatorās Missed Connections Contest!
Title: MC: Hit & Run
Author: AJ Nicole
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5787185744773120
Description: Love. Ha, whatās that? You wouldnāt know it even if you hit it with your carā¦ Literally. So what happens when YOU crash into your own destiny?
LGBT love choice, YOU character, FULL CC, tappable overlays, and Choices Matter with the Character Point System!
Iād love to do read for reads as well, but I really hope you all check out my story!
Hey guys! It would mean a lot to me if you checked out my story. It is for the recent Missed Connections Contest.
MC: Worlds Apart
In Ekra, Hazel has been told since she was little that Juna was dangerous. When she is saved by a Junaian, Hazel embarks on a journey to find him, discovering a dark secret. CC
Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!
It is in limelight.
Thanks for even considering reading it!
Name: Freckles and Roses (Limelight)
Author: CallMeRebeka (me)
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance (slightly dramatic too.)
Summary: Law college brings something unexpected for Rose. What will happen when she sees her childhood crush after 5 years? Was it just a silly kids crush or is it something deeper?
Notes: Character Customization available throughout the story
Link: episodeinteractive.{}com/s/5486045875994624
I donāt know why I canāt include link here?? So just remove the {}
thank you for this thread!
Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited toā¦ Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters: 4 (More to come)
Style: Limelight
Create your own characters and Choices Matter!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Shortened Link: https://bit.ly/2FHhOMS