I wrote a story, I would appreciate if anyone could read it and give me some feedbacks on improving it.
I spent alotta time on it so it’s a big bummer for me not to have a single read.
(I also do r4r, pm me)
This is my story
Title: To Service The Royalty
Author: Melina Rockni
Genre: Adventure/Romance (LL)
Chapters: Three (i’m writing the forth)
Description: Two sisters who lost their parents in a young age, move to another town and live in poverty. One a hard worker and a tomboy and the other, sensitive and desperate for love.