Promoting my Poem!

Hehe, I haven’t written a poem in a while, and I wrote this one for @/SaraSantini’s contest, but J wanted some opinions.

The World
By Rileyann Storm(AKA me)

Mother, I said to the woman I once knew,
Father, I said to the man I trusted,
Brother, I said to the only friend I had,
Sister, I said to the strongest person I knew,
Myself, I said in hushed tone, knowing that I’d never the light of day,
The world, I said, as I slowly, very slowly, faded away.

What’re your thoughts?

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Already told ya it’sPERFECT :heart:

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i love it!

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This poem is amazing!! :clapping:

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I know you did, Puppy :wink:

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Vampi :two_hearts:

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I’m jealous because I can’t write a poem for the life of me :sweat_smile:

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:joy:

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OH WOW this is just I cant I am speechless

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Awww, thank you so much!

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I LOVE IT SO MUCH
I try to do poems myself but i dont think they are good

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Well, if you ever need help, feel free to PM me :wink:

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Thanks

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Aww, well not aw. But it was very good :clapping: Do you take requests? :sweat_smile:

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Awww, thank you! And yep, I do :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

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Where can I fill out the form or request it, I actually need one–

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I don’t have any forms currently, but you can PM me and I’ll figure one out :grin: -If you’d like

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Alrighty, I will!

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:bomb: :mic_drop: :mind_blown:

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