Hey! I’d love to do a r4r/read for review with you!
My story’s got everything you’re looking for in your list above (directing is not super masterful but does use advanced techniques), and I can read your story and let you know what you’re doing well and what needs work! (or I can just do a straight up r4r if you don’t want a review)
Title: Life is Beautiful (formerly Frenemies)
Episodes 15: Ongoing
Description: College is off to a rocky start and now you’re being forced to turn to your cynical neighbor for help.