Promoting my story "Bad for Business" [R4R (with or without gems) available]

Sounds good! :two_hearts: I’ll send you a message on Instagram :blush:

Hi! I literally logged back onto Episode forums just to leave a comment about your story. I think it’s great, it’s rare that a story hooks me. I’m super picky, well done!

If I can just offer one piece of constructive criticism, it’d be great if you could have someone proofread the lines. There were some misspellings and words written in all lowercase (i.e., “i went to the shop” instead of "I went to the shop). I’m sure it’s not a huge issue to everyone but when a story is grammatically and punctually correct, it gives a more realistic feel. I also do wish the episodes were a bit longer, even if you might take two weeks to release but I appreciate your effort either way :slight_smile:

Otherwise, your story is great. I literally spend gems not only supporting you but to read 4 more episodes each time, lol. I love that once I customized my character, her parents were the same complexion. Many episode writers don’t do this. Thank you for being considerate of many of us who play episode but have to pretend we are adopted bc our parents are white, LOL.

That’s my only feedback. I’m super eager for episode 30! I enjoy helping you out and sending gems your way :slight_smile:

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Hi :hugs: thank you for the input, I’m happy you like the story :heart:

Hi! I’m down for a R4R. Let me know which story you’d be interested in :grin:

Story 1

Title: See the Light
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Chapters: 11 (Complete)
Description: You awaken in an alternate universe that mirrors your hometown; except it’s completely vacant. However, a family of seven help you unravel the truth in more ways than one. [CC]
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6251601538514944

Story 2

Title: Without a Trace
Genre: Mystery/Thriller
Chapters: 4 (Ongoing)
Description: After her sister vanishes, Talulah sets out on an investigative search with the help of arcane criminology major, Avon. Will their perseverance and wit be enough to find her?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6707281652809728

Instagram: @jcwhisper.writes
Thank you :purple_heart:

Hey there! Thank you for the thread! Here’s my story in case you are interested ! :avocado_love:

Title : 𝐒𝐖𝐘: 𝐁𝐞𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐌𝐞

Story description: A senior year trip to Rome sounds absolutely perfect! That was until Jade is forced to spend it with the one person she can’t stand: her ex.

Style : LL / full CC

Genre : Romance

Type of story : Standalone

Story status: Ongoing

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6462800826662912

Instagram : @dollyepisode

Thank you for this. :blush:
Story name: Avenge Me
Story Description: After losing her mother, Dulce stopped believing in love. When she sets out on a secret agent mission to uncover who killed her mother, will she find hope at last? Can she find out the true and secret that were kept away all these year. Human, Vampire. Limited CC, 2LL (Human&Vampire)
Genres: Drama, Action, Fantasy
How many chapters: Chapter 1-55 season 3 is now out. :butterfly: complete.
How many love interest: 2 LL
CC or Limit CC: Limited CC
Instagram daisyrodriguezepisode
Music or Sound: Yes both
Choice: Just clothes and Hairstyle free
Small Cover:


Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6183524831526912
My Instagram is @daisyrodriguezepisode you can dm me here or on Instagram.
Please stay safe. :hugs::pray:t2::heart:

Hi guys,
I haven’t done r4r for a while on this story, but thanks for your interest.

@Sydney_H please close this thread.