Feel free to check out mine
Story Title: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Fantasy/Mystery/Adventure/Thriller/Horror
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288
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Title: Fighter: Red Scars
Author: Hope/ Mélina (instagram: @HopeFrvrM)
Resume: Fighter’s sequel. Malia is completely broken and the government offers her a job. Is that really the solution?
Genre: action, drama.
Nb of episodes: 3 (more coming soon)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6019185639489536
Covers: Made by @archangel.epy
Hey this was a cool idea. I liked that you had different people for good and bad qualities and that you rated all the different aspects of the story
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OMG! This is my first time encounter with this thread! Can you critique my story? 
Tittle: Taken: Dead or Alive (INK)
Author: xoRoséxo
Genre: Drama/Action
Chapters: 12
Description: Rose & Sophia Beaumont are tough to handle. But what if one is taken and another one has been targeted to kill? Will they able to stay strong? Or love will get in the way?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5725258112892928
Is it just read your first chapter? Or? Because your frist chapter keeps changing is it? Sorries I feel a bit confuse.
Here’s my story The Star Necklace
Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity
Sorry you’re confused about the way I set things up. Each one of my stories is a new critique, and I made it so that you only have to read the first chapter for critique. The last 2 episodes isn’t important and I advise everyone not to read them because it’ll just waste your tickets.
So, like my first critique was “Rad’s Critique Corner: Infamous by Kayla S.” so it has its own story, and the rest of my critiques have their own story too. One story=one critique. I hope you understand a bit better now?
Thank you! I will add your story to my list!
I read the Marshmellows critique on Mystery on hanging hill lane that one… ohh its all inna different book is it?
The Rad’s critique infamous by Kayla S. is a different book?
Yes! Exactly. Each critique has its own book. Is everything okay now?
No wonder… I was very confused but its all alright now. Okiess Ill start hy reading the first critique book hahaha. Thanks!!!
No problem, I’m glad we figured this out! Happy reading!
Also, if you have a story of your own that you’d like me to critique let me know! 
Its above hahaha. It’s called Tribe of Malapinchi.
Anyways Im done with your Critique: Infamous by Kayla S.
Oh, right. I have that story on my list already. Thank you!
Title : Deception
Category: Drama/ Romance
Number of Episodes: * 3 (ongoing)
Short Description: You’re a girl who has everything except her freedom. But when dark secrets start to unravel, you’ll quickly learn that freedom always comes with a price.
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6481665563623424
Instagram : lucywrites1
