Finally got to it. Hi. My favorite part of your story is your camera angles, they’re really nice and set the scene really well. I loved how you characterized Athena and how she doesn’t understand why humans do the dumb things they do. I recommend revising some mispelled words (like far away is faraway), but your grammar is pretty good, it’s just some minor words. Great job on your story, and I hope you continue it.
By an hour I meant nearly a month. (oops)
I’d like to promote my story called Divided.
Below you can find the information you need to try it out.
Story Title: Divided
Genre: Fantasy, Adventure, Romance
Story Description: Charlotte is faced with a difficult decision that will change her life drastically.
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5685768820752384
Hiya! I will check out your story! Hopefully you can check out mine
These are the details
Author: Fluffy Rice
Genre: Comedy, Romance
Description: Childhood friends reunited after 10 years. Both Sierra and Peter are unaware that they knew each other from the past. (Remake)
Episodes: 4 (Ongoing)
This story is actually based on my own experiences in real life. ALSO, the cover arts are still Pending for Review, so the picture at the moment is the default art of the guy stepping on a banana peel.
(PS. It’s not the “Loving You Again (Discontinued)” story, that’s my old one in INK. The difference between the old and the remake is that the remake has more and better plot lines, and better directing!)
I’m down for a read for read
For a guaranteed feedback check out my website
Link below :
Go to ‘Author Section’
Click to the link a fill out the form.
Here is the description of my story
Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy
Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736
Hi! I’d like to promote my story too, I hope it’ll pick someone’s interest!
These are the info:
Author Insta: @bonniedundee.epi
Title: Game Of Disguises
Brief Description: Two best friends have fun by disguising themselves as other people and attend luxurious and fancy events, but what happens when they find themselves in the wrong place and at the wrong time?
LGBT inclusive + Advanced Directing