Hey there! I just started scripting my story and I would really like to know if it’s too slow or too fast or anything like that. It’s only a few scenes so far, but if anyone’s willing to share feedback that would be awesome!
TITLE: Aces and Keys
SHORT DESC: Lord Myka’s compass pin is supposedly the key to saving her world, so when she finds a human with the same compass tattooed on his arm— he could be the solution to everything.
Here’s the link
PS. Don’t read the second chapter, it’s just my intro and CC for future copy and paste.