Proof - read/judge my story?

Hey I’m wondering if any one could proof read/“judge” my story

Any feedback or opinions would be amazing!
And would you continue to read my story??
There’s three chapters ready!!

I’m still working on things like the description.

My story isn’t published yet so no tickets will be used :rofl:

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Thank you !

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