Proof Reader & Feedback please

I’ve written down a story up to chapter 12; and I would like someone to review it before I post anything.
Like spelling mistakes; see if the story is interesting; any kind of feedback. I want this story to be good.
Please let me know if you’re interested.

Thank you.

I would definitely be interested in reading your story and offering feedback if you would like. is there any specific time limit on this?

No. No time limit at all

Moved to Find a Writing Partner section! :v:t2: