Proof-reader needed

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Hey, I’ve recently finished 3 chapters of my story and I’d love to have someone else’s opinion as I’m new to coding😅. Feel free to give as much criticism as you’d like, I’m open to it all. Please do pm me if you would like to, thank you🙃 and stay safe!

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you should post it here:
https://forums.episodeinteractive.com/c/creators-discussion/share-feedback/29

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Thank you :smiley:

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what is your problem that not even knowing the story you have the need to write something like that?

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I think by ‘criticism’ in the post, I meant constructive criticism…

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I will give you feedback if you want. :slight_smile: I am just brutaly honest so and will directly write you about things I have seen unrealistic boring or confuzing.I am not very good in writing it mildly.:slight_smile:
So if you want send me the link.

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Thank you! Give me a second to transfer it to a google doc😅

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please just send me the link to the story so I can read it app…if you have any custom backhroud or overlays I would not be able to replay it if you send me the code.

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Of course, here is the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4717901009584128
Thank you so much❤️

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do you want the feedback her or via PM?

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Pm please

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I can help if you still need it!

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I like it a lot!

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Really? Thank you so much :smiley:

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