Proof reader(s) needed


#1

Hi there,

I am writing a story and I am planning on publishing it this weekend or the beginning of next week.
Before I publish I need 1 or more people to proof read my story.
You have to be really critical and you have to give advice on the following subjects:

  • Time of the episodes
  • In how far you get the feeling the choices matter (most of all in the 3th episode)
  • How is the language (I am dutch, so I am not native english speaker)
  • Are there flaws in the details?
  • Is there enough happening in the story?
  • Last, but really important, would you continue reading?

If you want to spend this weekend like max an hour to really help me out I would love that.
Just leave a message here and I might reach out to you.
Thanks!


#2

You can send me a share link. I’ll try to read your story as soon and diligently as possible. Also it would be great if you could read my story “H & V: Fake Friend” (http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6167433466478592) while waiting for my feedback.


#3

Yeah I’d be happy to if you send me the share link. And if you could do the same for my story that would be great: innocence http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5916851505070080
Thanks


#4

Hi, I wouldn’t mind helping you.


#5

Moved to Find a Writing Partner section! :v:t2:


#6

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#7