I am writing a story and I am planning on publishing it this weekend or the beginning of next week.
Before I publish I need 1 or more people to proof read my story.
You have to be really critical and you have to give advice on the following subjects:
- Time of the episodes
- In how far you get the feeling the choices matter (most of all in the 3th episode)
- How is the language (I am dutch, so I am not native english speaker)
- Are there flaws in the details?
- Is there enough happening in the story?
- Last, but really important, would you continue reading?
If you want to spend this weekend like max an hour to really help me out I would love that.
Just leave a message here and I might reach out to you.