Proof Reading anyone?

Hi there, I have recently published a story called “Falling Together” and I would love for someone to proof read/ give me feedback on it! Any kind of feedback at all, so long as it’s honest.
Please private message me if you have any feedback or suggestions for me, here’s the link to the story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5571076095148032
Also, if anyone else has any stories they want to be proof-read, send me some of your links and I will return the favour.
Read as many episodes as you want, even if its only one.
Thank you.

R4R?!

No, thank you, I’m only here to proof read and help people who need it. I read the first chapter of your story anyway, and it looks like you’re doing just fine on your own. Great job!

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