Proofreadd and reviewww my unpublished story

Title says it all - only episodes 1-3 please.

Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6753540291887104

Pm feedback.
Thanks.

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I’ll read it :grinning:

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Thank youu! :heart:

Your story is amazing!!!
I enjoyed it!!! :grinning:

Just a few notes:

-they went offscreen on this part

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Oh yeah I’ll fix them, thanks

Np, sorry if I sounded rude in any way :grin:

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No, you didn’t!
It’s great to point out parts, it’s helps me to improve. I do appreciate it, thanks :blush:

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Np :relieved:

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