MOSTLY ADVICE NEEDED ATM
I’m starting a new story (it’s nowhere near close to finished on the first episode) and I need major advice on it. I was reading about what made people leave after the first episode for and I feel like my story has a lot of what people don’t like. The last thing I want to do is make a boring cliche story. I also don’t want my dialogue to sound unrealistic or stupid. If you can help me that’d be great, DM and I’ll send you my story. 
My instagram is brand new which is why it has a little following and no pfp: it’s @RAZDAZ.EPY
