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Hello there!

I just started my very first story. It is called Mated to a Rebel.
I don‘t want to reveal too much, but it is basically a fantasy werewolf romance.
Amara (The Protagonist) will become the future Alpha of her pack and is forced to find a mate.
She will be confronted with an arranged marriage, her actual mate and of course finding her own independence and managing the responsibility of being an Alpha!

I would love for someones honest opinion. A proof reader, things I could improve or just ideas for the story.

Thank you so much! Any little help is welcome.

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I could help u…

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Hey there! I’d love to help :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:
Anytime, maybe we can exchange Instagrams and I promise I would give you honest opinions for your story. It actually looks really interesting!

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Sure thank you! Here is the link :wink:

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I actually really like it and for your first time your directing was impressive…But I think you could go a little slow. Otherwise I love it

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I do commissioned proofreading
let me know if you are interested

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Thank you so much! That means a lot.
Yeah I was thinking that too haha sometimes its just hard to hold back XD

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Hey! Yes, thank you so much.

Here is the link to my story, let me know what you think.

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