Proofreader and honest Opinion

Hello there!

I just started my very first story. It is called Mated to a Rebel.
I don‘t want to reveal too much, but it is basically a fantasy werewolf romance.
Amara (The Protagonist) will become the future Alpha of her pack and is forced to find a mate.
She will be confronted with an arranged marriage, her actual mate and of course finding her own independence and managing the responsibility of being an Alpha!

I would love for someones honest opinion. A proof reader, things I could improve or just ideas for the story.

Thank you so much! Any little help is welcome.

I could help u…

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Hey there! I’d love to help :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:
Anytime, maybe we can exchange Instagrams and I promise I would give you honest opinions for your story. It actually looks really interesting!

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Sure thank you! Here is the link :wink:

I actually really like it and for your first time your directing was impressive…But I think you could go a little slow. Otherwise I love it

I do commissioned proofreading
let me know if you are interested

Thank you so much! That means a lot.
Yeah I was thinking that too haha sometimes its just hard to hold back XD

Hey! Yes, thank you so much.

Here is the link to my story, let me know what you think.

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