Basically I’ve got a story that I know need a lot of improvement the I couldn’t possibly notice; I’m hoping someone could proofread it (go through it line by line and give good and rigorous opinions and observation).
I’ll leave the story’s details below; if you feel you want to help me pm me!
It is a fantasy that contains romance and action.
People who enjoy vampires stories or werewolves stories may like this one, considering it contains all types of creatures (dragons, wolves, trolls, vamps, witches, fairies…).
Description : Captive since the age of 8, Lucretia finally has a chance to start fresh, but what happens when a war between good and bad rises? Will you be the one to provoke it or end it?
Genre : Fantasy
Chapters : 7