Proofreader needed 📖

Hello, everyone!
Basically I’ve got a story that I know need a lot of improvement the I couldn’t possibly notice; I’m hoping someone could proofread it (go through it line by line and give good and rigorous opinions and observation).
I’ll leave the story’s details below; if you feel you want to help me pm me!

Tangled Spells
It is a fantasy that contains romance and action.
People who enjoy vampires stories or werewolves stories may like this one, considering it contains all types of creatures (dragons, wolves, trolls, vamps, witches, fairies…).
Description : Captive since the age of 8, Lucretia finally has a chance to start fresh, but what happens when a war between good and bad rises? Will you be the one to provoke it or end it?
Genre : Fantasy
Chapters : 7
Link: https://linktr.ee/kennedymolly97

Thanks!!!

Hi :heavy_heart_exclamation:
If you want I can proofread it and I can do that as many times as you want but only if it doesn’t need any tickets

By ticket you mean? :joy:

I don’t think that there is a diffrence but yeah without using tickets

Sorry english is not my first language

But you mean the tickets that episode provides one when writing them or the passes?

I don’t know what you mean…Lik what kind of ticket do you mean ?

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Hahaha this is so confusing… what ticket did you mean when you wrote the first post?

I meant the 4 tickets that with them you can read an episode/chapter of a story
I don’t know if you can understand what I mean

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Oh yes, passes (lmao this is what I called them) :joy:

Yesss anyway those :joy:

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Unfortunately; I can’t :frowning: thanks for offering :slight_smile:

I know how to do it I can tell you except if you didn’t want to do it this way but I think that there aren’t people who do that with passes or whatever those are called

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No, it’s okay :two_hearts: I really appreciate you offering :heart:

Oooooh…ummm…okay then

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Hi, if you still need a proofreader I can help you.:blush:

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Thank you, but I already found one :slight_smile: Maybe in the future :heart::blush:

Can you help me out with proofreading?

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I can if you are still in need of one!

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Hey, can you tell me how to do it plzz :heavy_heart_exclamation:

I already found someone :slight_smile: thanks you