I’m currently in the process of writing a new story, and would really appreciate some honest (and non-sugarcoated) feedback! Feel free to be as brutally honest as possible, I really want to ensure that this story is at its full potential! So far only episode one is done, so if you’re interested in reading episodes two and three once they’re done feel free to let me know!
If you’re interested I’ll PM you the link!
I don’t want to do any R4Rs, so please don’t ask. I just want feedback from anyone that would like to help!
- you’ll be credited at the end of the episodes you proofread too! <3
more details about the story before you read it
it’s in the thriller genre, has two love interests (no LGBTQ+ option), and has impactful choices that will determine the ending you get.