Proofreading exchange :)

Is someone able to read the first episode of my first story? And be able to give me some feedback. I like complete honesty but would prefer the feedback to help me be better!
If you want me to give feedback back, Just leave the story below the feedback or message me.
This is the link (and the password for the bonus scene is Amethyst)


I can take a look if you would like, I think I am pretty good at giving feedback :grin: (look at some of my feedback topics to understand)

That would be great, I’d love to hear it

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