Proofreading first episode

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Hey! So I’ve just finished the first episode of my first episode story (lol I’ve written other stories but never had the audacity to even finish the first chapter, can someone relate? :sweat_smile: )

Anyways, I’ve put sooooo much work into this episode and yet I feel like it’s way too short (it’s just around 500 lines and I have no idea how to make it longer…) and not interesting or making the reader hooked or whatever. Basically I need help from someone who can ”proofread” my episode and tell me how I can make it longer (if it’s needed?) or just improve it in general :blush:

Just a lil’ side note: If you’re gonna do this I need you to be honest, I’m not doing this to get compliments on my episode, I genuinely want to improve it. :revolving_hearts:

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I can, I have some free time right now :slight_smile:

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Alright, thanks. How do I send you the script? :grinning:

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Just send me the link to your story :slight_smile:

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It’s not published since I’be just written the first episode yet, so you mean send the link to the page where you write and stuff? (I’m sorry I really have no clue on how to do this, it’s a new experience for me haha)

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At the bottom of the page where you can decided what you want to do next, there’s a link. If you send me that link, I can read it although it’s not published

There should be something that says: Share or story
or something like that, and then there’s the link to your story

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