Hey! So I’ve just finished the first episode of my first episode story (lol I’ve written other stories but never had the audacity to even finish the first chapter, can someone relate? )
Anyways, I’ve put sooooo much work into this episode and yet I feel like it’s way too short (it’s just around 500 lines and I have no idea how to make it longer…) and not interesting or making the reader hooked or whatever. Basically I need help from someone who can ”proofread” my episode and tell me how I can make it longer (if it’s needed?) or just improve it in general
Just a lil’ side note: If you’re gonna do this I need you to be honest, I’m not doing this to get compliments on my episode, I genuinely want to improve it.