Published first story- Wild one

Hello friends :sweat_smile:
This feels weird and stuff, 'cause I’ve never done this before, but I’d like to present to you my very first story!

Title: Wild one
Author: LizzKwon
Genre: Fantasy / romance
Description: Being woken up in the middle of the night and forced to flee her home country, Tala soon has to face a new life, an old love, and a part of herself that she hasn’t yet discovered.
Cover:
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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6173724752347136

As this is my first story I’d really REALLY appreciate any feedback and constructive criticism :slight_smile:

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I’ve been reading stories on Episode for years now and never found the courage to publish my own :sweat_smile: But now I’ve finally done it. I wrote a story, drew a cover, fought my way through that annoying thing called ‘coding’ and actually got to publish it :smiley:
I really don’t know if anyone but me would like it, soooo… I’d be really happy about feedback, if you have the time :blue_heart:
This story is probably not perfect (by far), but it would mean the world to me, if at least a few people read it :blue_heart:

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Hi I’d be very happy to do r4r with you, send screenshot to me when you finished I’ll do the same :blush:
Title Rose
Author Jojo
Genre Mystery
Style Ink
Instagram @fongjoline
Description Already struggling with her past, Rose falls into some more drama romance, mystery, what adventure and heartbreak will she face next?
Link http://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/5164972039208960

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Even before I start reading I have to say, that cover is beautiful! I’m really looking forward to reading your story^^

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Okay, I just read the first episode aaaand was too dumb to take a screenshot :joy: But that doesn’t matter, I’ll just take one next episode, because this story is now in my favourites :ok_hand: I like how you directed the story and worked with zooms and I liked how you used flashbacks of the past to show why Roses character turned out to be like it is today^^ I’d only suggest a proof reader 'cause your grammar is a little off sometimes, but I still understood what you meant at all times. :smile:

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Would you like to do R4R?

Title: Ocean’s 5
Author: Lara P.
Genre: Action
Chapters: 3 out (more coming soon)
Style: Ink
Description: Five highly skilled and most dangerous people on Earth are brought together for the biggest heist ever seen. What can go wrong?
Instagram: @larapstories
Link: https://episode.app.link/mRmxbzLPYR

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I love the drawing on your cover!!! How did you do it?

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Feel free to check out my story.

My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Story style: Secret Surprise :wink:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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With Ibis paint X and an hour of free time :sweat_smile:

Sure, your story sounds interesting^^

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My god… why is everyone so good at coding and zooms and… and… everything?! Now I feel really bad about my story :sweat_smile:
Your zooms were on point, the humor is fabulous, the story sounds interesting and I sincerely hope Mr.King gets a big cupcake-punch right in his big mouth :laughing:

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Title: Behind Closed Doors
Author: JessDeBest
Genre: Drama/Mystery
Style: INK
Story Description: College is all fun and games until you discover what’s behind closed doors. Students disappear one by one, and you’re going to get to the bottom of it.
Instagram: @iwrite.stories
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6459913677111296

Please check out my story. We can do r4r if interested :slight_smile:

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I’ll look into it after christmas^^

Thank you for this thread! I would be willing to do a read for read with you if you would like. <3
Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960