Put an Eye on this Composition?

[Gargamel]

I laid out this scene of a taxi dance hall, a place where men come to pay to dance with the women there. What do you think of the positioning I have going? The main characters are going to enter in the foreground of the third zone.

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[l12beth]

This looks pretty good!

Are you going to pan from zone 1 to zone 3? If so, personally I’d add like 2-4 characters in zone 1, and like 1 pair in zone 2 and 3.

[Gargamel]

The space I left in zone 3 is for the main characters, but I’ll look at that zone 1 space. Thanks!