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You’re not the first to say that. I just spat drink out. Omg lol.

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I gave u some ideas c;

we can poison her with mustard gas! Just get bleach & ammonia overlays and have her mix them together while she is cleaning, and that makes mustard gas and she can die! :blush:

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Okie guys, by the way tings r looking, i can get half done today, maybe?!

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Take your time! :black_heart:

I like your idea better than mine… :sweat_smile:

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Story name Vip Brother:Love is…
Authors name Megz_episode
Episodes 5
Instagram name megz_episode7997
How many episode you want me to review 4 are enough
Description A story about 16 celebrities who enter the house of Big Brother uder 24/7 surveillance for 2 months to win the prize of 500 000$, but before that they have to go through all challenges of Big Brother.
I would like you to promote my story.
Style LL
Cover

Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4977128782561280
Hello I would like you to give my story a review. :slight_smile::slight_smile::slight_smile:

what was urz?

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Ok, I will add ye

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I was just joking lol. :sweat_smile:

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I lowkey am gonna cry if u don’t kill her…

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My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288
No. Of Chapters to review: 5 . If not 3.

Oke, I will review u

Yes, I meant oke

Bad Behavior:
First Impressions:
I really liked your cover! I feel like it matched the title, & description!
First Chapter:
• FINNALY, NO ANNYOING AUTHOUR INTTRROO YAASS BBIIICCTTHHHH
• I like the splashes and use of music!
• Good that you added in background characters, or the extra mile!
• I see diversity! Woo!
• I like how you introduced the characters!
• Nice background on mc? Just started but I am pretty Shure it is the mc!
• Nice you added in CC option, a lot of ppl like it, and bother u do add it in!
• Straight forward with introducing characters, I like it!
• Maybe * out parts of curse words? Personally idc, but you know how ppl are!
• I like how you made the mc have her own personalities, and realistic with what the scenes would be like, other than them being fantasized!
• Oooouu sis that attitude c;
• I Like how u introduced and developed relationships with other characters! I already hate the mom, lol.
• Maybe try to expand more on Lucas’s mom? I am interested on what is going on!
• Who is the girl w/ Alana & Lucas? Girlfriend…. right? SHE IS A BITCH!
• Can we get an option to kill the bich!?
• Interesting, and hooks me! Good first impression.
• Good chapter length!
Second Chapter:
• OH SIS A FUCKING BABY WELL SHIT IT IS THE SECOND MF CHAPTER!!!
• What happened to the baby?
• Aaaww so cute!
• Idk if it was supposed to be an air kiss when they were in the bed together, but it was…
• I still hate Tina. Can she die soon plz?
• I am trying to take that Tina bicth down, add in more choices points to slay the beast?
• PLZ don’t make Alana a blood, and just her liking red…
• OML YAASS THAT WALK KKWWEENN SSLLAAYYYYYYEEE (that needs to be in ink too!!!)
• I like how you didn’t forget about other characters!
• What is the mc’s connection to Rachel and Ry? I forgot, so try to make some scenes with them?
Third Chapter:
• Ok


XD
• He doesn’t have no strong pull out game, FUCKING DUMB ASS TINA (that scene made me laugh doe)
• Can we not make the baby his, and her cheating with the guy that got Alana preggerz bc she is a bich and I tink it would be gud ass tea?
• Tina is such a bich, we need that to not be his baby!
• Idfc if I knew she was pregger, I WOULD DO IT EITHER WWAYYY!!

Forth Chapter:
• Ok so I almost cracked my phone screen bc of Tina… can we kill her soon, ik I said this like 20 times but SERIOUSLY!!!
• Loved the Ari reference :heart:
• Wait… what happened with the end of chapter 3!?
• We need more options 2 drag Tina and I loved the scene with her and Alana!
• OOUUU SHIT SIS….
• OML POISINED DDAAMMNNN IT WAS THAT TINA BICTH HUH!?
Fifth Chapter:
• Damn, I hate Tina, but she is good about being fake…
• Why are you stalling to see about Alana?
• I-I am fucking lost 4 words


• I hope Tian chokes of those wings if Lucas gets dem 4 her…
• I FRICKIN KNEW IIITTTTTT!!! SHE TOOK HER NOW WHERE IS MY COOKIE!?
Sixth Chapter:
• HOW DARE YOU SHOW US WHAT HAPPANED TO HER, THE GO BACK TO RY AND LUCAS!! D:<
• Lol, I love these little scenes you add in.
• I.NEED.MORE.TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA.
• Oh shister…. we need to drag them bishes who got Alana!
• Still nothing on the baby Alana had.
• Lmfao at the walks they have in LL.
• About time someone noticed something is wrong!!!
I feel in love with yuh story so I ended up doing them all…

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starting ur story now!

The parents are main characters in season 2. I will talk about Lucas mom more in the start of season two :smirk:

This will be revealed real soon…

They also will have more scenes because I love them.

I’ll go back and check this lol

I love the comments about Tina :joy::joy::joy:
Thank you for this review, this made me laugh and gave me confidence :black_heart:

Ye welcome now I have to stay up till 1Am to review stories, but I can’t sleep till like 2 ssooo…

Thanks so much for this :heart::heart:

Title: Compulsion
Desc: Zyro Morte is sent on death row. He’s given the chance to extend his time after the FBI need him for a mission. Simple? One problem, he has to jeopardise his soulmates family!?
Cover: (Optional) Not made yet
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6725446713540608
Number Of Chapters To Review: 3 although episode 3 isn’t completely finished yet however you can still read it!

okie, I got yuh 2

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Title Scars
Description The past created who Eve is right now. Life never goes easy on her. That’s why she became so ruthless to anyone she’s ever met.
Link CLICK HERE
Chepters 3

you have been added to the waiting list

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