Question about Becomes command

Nope. Before episode 8 your readers will see the character as they originally are before they became the MC. However when you’re testing on the app and re-play your story, most likely that character will already start with the becomes command applied even if you didn’t apply it in episode 1. But this is only visible to you, not your reader.

Yes, you can use becomes command again on a character.

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