Hey guys,
I was hoping to do R4R with people but just the 1st chapter. I think the 1st chapter is the most important one, so I think it’s the one people should focus on for reviews.
For me, if I really like a story I’ll keep going past chapter 1. I don’t mean to sound harsh but I think it’ll be more efficient and quicker so we can all be better writers. RULES
Tell me if you want your reviews PMd or written here
If I have liked your post then I will be doing a R4R
Thank youu!
My story: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun Author: MKG Genre: Romantic Comedy / Slice of Life Story style: Limelight Description: Kiara, Willow, Samantha, and Sooyoung are just 4 girls trying to survive high school. Follow them as they grow up and discover first love, pain and what true friendship means. Episodes: 3 so far Linkhttp://episodeinteractive.com/s/4612451922411520
Willing to do a read for read with anyone if interested. You don’t have to but if you want to do a read for read with me, please sign up on the attached form. It helps me keep my reads in order!
Hi! I would love it if you could check out my story
Title: Twisted Author: Empress Genre: Mystery/Crime/Romance (a little) Chapters: 8 (ongoing) Style: INK Description:
Was I naive… or guilty? Honest… or a liar? Maybe you can be a better judge of it than me. But listen to this story carefully. It’s quite… Twisted.
Here are the details: Title: Love The Adrenaline Number of chapters: 5/6 Genre: Love/Drama ( I know this doesn’t exist in categories but the story has both) Author: Daniela Describtion: Nicole is a strong, independent girl and she likes the extreme, but behind these things, Nicole suffered a loss,but her life gets more interesting when Blake shows up The Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6193869524893
Hey just read your 1st chapter
Here’s my review (I’m bulletpoints):
the opening was cool
theres new limelight options so you may want to add those in
I like the segways between the newscaster and Charlize
I feel like the slapping was a little out of place, couldn’t he get her fired for that?
I like how diverse the characters are
-I really liked the backgrounds you used
I agree with Charlize that background music is not okay
oh man the choices, I enjoyed that you wanted to make the readers understand what was happening
But I think as a person who doesn’t enjoy crime episodes too much it was hard lol
Overall I think your directing is good but the choices were very hard for me to figure out which ones to press. I do like Charlize though. Some parts were funny but not realistic for this kind of crime story. I think you have to find that balance because it’s more on the funnier side. Unless that’s what you want . I do think if you make the choices a little simpler and dialogue it will be a great story.
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Story name Just when i found love Story style Ink Genre Drama Story description A love she believes in and a love he uses as a reprisal of the past. What happens when the hidden truth uncovers?? is everything what it seems?? Customized characters No but trust me, they’re HOT! Choices Yes Cover
Your story is nice and cool😎
And i read all three chapters.
Just that it isn’t that funny as you tagged it to be but well I don’t know, maybe on the next coming chapters and i actually can’t wait
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