R4R and feedback for new authors/stories!

Hi I just published my very first story ever! I would love some honest feedback and to do some read for reads with other new authors!
If you would to participate, share your story below and respond with screenshots and thoughts as we read!
My story is:
Title: The Big Trip
Author: Beks
Description: Bored and unfulfilled with her life, one young women leaves everything she’s ever known behind in search of adventure, excitement, and maybe even love.
CC/3 LI’s/Choices Matter
Style: LL
Episodes: 3 with more coming
Genre: Adventure/ Romance


I’d Love to do a r4r :heart:
My story:
Title: Under the Stars
Author: Aykay
Genre: romance
Description: One day Jasmine decided to start a new life in the big city. But it seemed that fate isn’t good to her. Her only ray of hope: Ian Veira, a city boy through and through…
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6752037555208192

I would love to do a Read for Read.

I’m new to coding stories on episodes. I did make an original version of this story using mobile creation, but I didn’t finish the story, so I decide to continue it in limelight and learn how to code.

Hope you enjoy it XD

Title: “Untold Story” (limelight version)

Author: Amanda Candies

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Angel always wanted to visit the town, but she wasn’t allowed to. Her parents have a secret. Will Angel find out what it is.

Chapters: 3 (More coming soon)

Social: Here is my social in case you want to keep reading so you can stay updated. Instagram: ac_.episode

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6413355786764288

Hey, I’d love to r4r :blush:

So here’s my story:
Title: Reality behind Glasses
Genre: Drama, Romance
Episodes: 4(more coming soon)
Description: Layla returns back home to reunite with her childhood friends - disguised as a guy! But on her first day in school, she’s exposed by one of her classmates! [LL,CC, Art,Choices M]
Style: Limelight

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5385205688631296

Hey just finished! Forgot to take SS in Chp 3 but here’s some from chapter 2! I really started getting into the story more in the second chapter and thought Ian was a fun character, I liked his playfulness!

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Hey, wanna do r4r?
Title: Eat Your Heart Out
Author name: F/N
Description: Wishing for an angel entangled your life,as what fell down upon you surely wasn’t one. Fierce Vampire or an Enigmatic Detective? What will you choose? Love, Lust or perhaps Yourself?
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 3 (Ongoing)
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5898407973683200
Additional notes: CC, Choices matter. LL
Instagram: @fnepisode

Wanna r4r with me?

Done reading yours :two_hearts:

Just finished! Love the vine reference!

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I really enjoyed this story! So funny and your directing is great!

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So good! Looking forward to the next episode!

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Thanks for your feedback :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Im done reading yours and I really enjoyed it :blush:

This is my Magicka contest entry, Magicka: Nathaniel - The Power of Light. I would love to do R4R with you. :smile:

Author: Auremiol
Description: Nathaniel is the Master of Dark Magic, criminal and assassin. He only cares about his crew and twin sister. Until one ordinary gig turns his life upside down.(Male MC, CC, Choices Matter, 1Li)
Genre: Fantasy
Chapters: 3 chapters out. More coming soon!
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4543443501907968

IG: @auremiol.episode

Would you be interested in r4r? x

Title: A Different Path
Author: AlwaysAuthor
Genre: Romance
Summary: Cadence Allaire, a young French girl who moves her life across the world to America. What will happen when she finds out the real reason that she had to move?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4642924088066048

I can do r4r

Title: Magicka: Ethereal
Genre: Fantasy
love interest: only one. not up for discussion.
Art scenes: Yes Optinal to watch
CC: Full.
Choices: yes
Mini-games: YES YES YES!!!
Grammar: amazing thanks to @MissHaze
Description: walking back to college from work you find an unconscious man, while waiting for an ambulance a magic creature hides in your backpack, but other people are looking for that creature too. people who are not human but something more magical. but are you trusting the right people.

link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4693661906698240

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Thank you, did you take other screenshots from the story?

Hi, I would love to do a read4read with you🙂

Author: Jewels

Title: The Enchantments

Genre: Fantasy

Episodes: 4 (For now)

Description: A witch is shunned from her coven for not marrying the warlock her parents arranged for her, after that she seeks a new life and true love. (CC)

Style: Limelight

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6402468151623680


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Title: The Georgia Peach and the Alpha
Author: Jazzimay94
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes:5 (ongoing)
Style: LL
IG: jazzimay94
Description: Mariah is the wolf of legends but all she wants to do is to finish school at her dream university. What happens when she meets her mate, Dominic Wayne? Why is everyone after her? Read to find out.


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Hey sorry it took me so long, it took me a minute to catch up on everyone but I really like the story! Good luck in the contest!

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I finished reading yours too! :relaxed: It has a great potential! Just keep learning and make sure to always use talk - animations when they are talking and sometimes characters were talking with loop at same time. So just check those. I did like your story very much. :relaxed:
And I’m glad that you enjoyed reading Nathaniel! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: