Thanks for the review!
And I’m glad you liked the characters ^^ 
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Hi 
This is my story:
Title : 10 Preconditions
Genre : Romance (with a lot of drama)
Style : Limelight
Chapters : 3, more coming soon
Description : 10 Preconditions - everything Lola needs to never fall in love…
But what happens when Jonathan enters her life and slowly makes Lola break her own rules?
Includes :
CC (MC & LI)
Choices
Point system
Author : MyEpisodees
Instagram : myepisodees
Thank you soo muchh ! I’m soo glad you liked my story 
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Send me proof of reading my story and I would happily do your feedback.
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@milena1 Hope you like your feedback!
A Distraction Ep 1
- I think that the character should’ve walked into the scene rather than sliding in.
- Loved that you let the readers choose the type of body that they want.
- Try not to highlight lines, or put a line through it.
- Loved how you introduced each of the Evolved and gave a background story of what happened.
- It was cute to see the family as a whole.
- I love the conflict between the factions.
- I think you should’ve left the cheering on throughout the speech rather than stopping it.
- Loved the sadness when Kol picked a different faction.
- I think it would’ve been better if the reader got to choose their own faction.
A Distraction Ep 2
- I love the sass in Eliza.
- I felt so sad when I found out that Kaedin and Eliza were together.
- The group should’ve walked in, not slid in.
- I didn’t like Kaedin in the shower scene. He was an ass.
- I love the flashbacks.
- Loved the uniforms. There were so cute.
- Loved the suspense with the Bones.
- Loved Kaedin’s humour.
- Eliza stayed still for too long after she said “follow me”.
- The training scenes were entertaining.
- Loved how you had choices in the story.
- I felt bad for Esther when Eliza kissed Kaedin.
A Distraction Ep 3
- I love your intro with the horse.
- Loved how we get a background story about Kaedin’s past.
- I felt bad for Esther and the fact that she didn’t know how to swim.
- I think you need to clean up the scene where Kaedin saves Esther.
- I do not like Gina for coming between Kol and Esther.
- Esther was facing the wrong way when she got mad at Kol.
- I hate Kol for throwing Esther under the bus.
- It’s not right to force readers to support you.
Summary
Overall, I liked the plot of your story and that’s the only reason why I will keep reading your story once it’s finished but forcing the readers to support you is what can turn someone off from continuing reading so be careful with your choices.
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Hello! Thank you! I left episode for a while and just ame back. The new update kind of confuses me. What do you mean by forcing someone to support me? Is there a way to turn it off?
@simi.a Hope you like your feedback!
Apply Pressure Ep 1
- Your intro seemed really professional.
- I think you should’ve included the sound of a knock rather than saying it.
- Check your sentences so that they don’t have random capital letters.
- Really impressed with your directing.
- Loved how you introduced all of Cassara’s friends.
- Loved how well you directed phones into scenes.
- Loved how you included Kayla’s drama into the story.
- I loved your outro.
Apply Pressure Ep 2
- Loved Cassara’s sarcasm at the start.
- I don’t get why Cassara didn’t like the guys.
- Loved the connection between Michael and Cassara.
- So funny when Cassara and Michael tried to get Jareph and Brianna off the table.
- Loved how protective Cassara got of Brianna.
- Make sure to spell names with capital letters.
- Loved how you had a mini game.
- Good that it was left on a cliffhanger.
Apply Pressure Ep 3
- Loved how the guys from the club were the ones at the meeting.
- Check that your sentences end with punctuation.
- I feel like there will be sparks flying between Cassara and Anthony.
- Funny when Cassara and Brianna made fun of Sienna.
- I don’t get why Anthony doesn’t like Cassara at all.
- Loved the bromnce between Anthony and Michael.
- Loved the mystery at the end.
Summary
Overall, your story is very high quality and I was really impressed. If I were to be picky all you need to make sure is to check for random capital letters and to end your sentences with punctuation. Other than that I loved everything!
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At the end of your 3rd episode there is a choice of supporting you with 6 diamonds or skipping it and when you press skip it won’t let you truly skip. It’s stuck on the choice. Maybe there is something that you have put at the end of your script?
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Thank you for reading and for your feedback 
I’m really happy you liked the story 
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oh okay thanks ill fix it!
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If anyone could take the time to read mine I would really appreciate it!
Story: The Unwanted
Genre: Mystery
Insta: @evilyn.writes
Style: Ink
Description:
15 years since we’ve been deemed useless and deported to Earth. Now, we reunite to solve the supernatural murders and as past becomes present, our mistakes become fatal…
Advanced directing/ overlays etc.
Link: https://episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5431076573085696
Also up for r4r!
Thanks
You will have to send me proof that you have read my story then you will have your feedback
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Hi thanks for this thread!
Story: Addicted to you
Author: LadyW
Instagram: @ladyw.episode
Description: A “normal” life is all Laila has known, but what happens when her family’s dark secret comes to light and the only person she feels safe with is the school’s bad boy.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6064785618829312
You need to send proof of reading my story then I’ll give you your feedback.
@LADYW Hope you like your feedback!
Addicted to you Ep 1
- I love you you introduced yourself and gave some insight.
- Love the quote at the start.
- Make sure to read your sentences so that they make sense.
- Love how you talked about the mother-daughter bond.
- Make sure the “i” is capital.
- Loved how you introduced Bella and gave a bit information about her.
- Loved how you compared the school to a swimming pool.
- Don’t confuse your “a” and “an”.
- Loved the humour between Ricky and Liam.
- Learn the difference between "of and “off”.
- Make sure to end your sentences with punctuation.
- Liam faced the wrong way when talking to Madison.
- I feel like Madison should’ve asked Liam out first before saying no.
- I didn’t like how Ricky was talking to Madison.
- I’m really curious about what’s going on with Miley.
Addicted to you Ep 2
- I felt sad for Miley when she went to the cemetery.
- Loved how Bella convinced Laila to have a sleepover.
- It was funny when Bella fell.
- Liam is hilarious!
- It’s weird how the boys keep winking at each other.
- Loved how Daryl teased Ricky.
- I wish Miley would just tell Laila the truth.
- Make sure to spell words correctly like “clothes” not “clothe”.
Addicted to you Ep 3
- I hate how Laila and her dad have a bad relationship.
- I didn’t expect the dad and Miley to be in contact.
- It’s so sad how Laila blames herself for what her dad did.
- I didn’t like how Laila took her anger out on Bella.
- Love how Bella calmed Laila down and told her to listen to her mom.
- Loved Bella’s enthusiasm about the party.
- Loved how confident Liam is with Laila.
- Hate Madison and her attitude.
Summary
Overall, you didn’t have any flaws with your directing which was impressive. The only thing you have to look for is your grammar. I will continue reading your story but just watch out for your grammar.
Hello!
I posted on Episode my first story and I will be honored of u give it a try.
Here is the link to my story (Show me your weakness):
Description of my story:
Trying to be strong in difficult times isn’t something new for you. But how will you react in front of love when everything around you is falling apart?
Mystery, Drama, Romance and so much more!
Thank you for you time!
Have a nice day!
Send me proof of reading my story first then you’ll receive feedback
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Sure! I’ll send u the ss once I’m done 