R4R and Feedback, Promote Your Story!

@ChocolatePie Hope you like your feedback!

Love, Hate Ep 1
  • Loved your customisation.
  • Your third character with pink hair had an error. It wouldn’t let you continue with the story until I pressed “done” 3 times.
  • I’m confused. Is Avery actually married to Geon?
  • I didn’t like how the bodyguards are blended together.
  • Make sure that when the characters are speaking, it’s not in mind bubbles.
  • You need to end your sentences with punctuation.
  • Loved the body swap.
  • It’s good that you had questions at the end of your episode.
Love, Hate Ep 2
  • It’s hilarious how Avery is flirting with Geon.
  • If a character is supposed to be walking, make sure they’re walking.
  • Make sure to place speech bubbles in the right place.
  • When writing dialogue, try to not use initials like “btw” because it doesn’t look professional.
  • Avery was walking on spot for a few seconds which I think needs fixing.
  • Loved the suspense at the end with Liam.
Love, Hate Ep 3
  • Make sure to check your sentences so that they make sense.
  • Loved Luca’s enthusiasm about food.
  • Love the hate between Liam and Avery.
  • Liked how your episode had points.

Overall, you have a unique plot line which I liked but you have a lot of directing and grammar mistakes in your story which could put people off so all you need to do it go back and read every episode and fix those little mistakes until you like how your episodes turn up.

Psychopathic |9 out now|
Here is description
Sometimes we do bad things for people we love. But keep in mind I would never do anything to hurt you… Well that’s what I think
1LI|choices matter|

Genre: thriller (psychological thriller)
Some spoilers/sneakpeaks/ or whatever you call it lol

Link to my story! Would love to hear positive feedback!

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I would love to do a R4R if you’d like.

Title: The Constant Journey
Author: Mystic Pixie
Description: Esmee has been searching for someone she lost a long time ago. With motherhood and being one of the top arms dealers around, she has a lot going on. Will the lost ever become the found?
Number of episodes: 5 & more coming
Genre : Action
Style: Limelight
Amazing Cover : @rowenj_epi
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5019330017034240

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Okay perfect, I already read the episodes ahead of time lol. You should receive them shortly.

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Hi Jasmine. Just saw this queen and I want to make a R4R with you. How do you feel about that queen?
Here is my Instagram in case you want to DM; EmilyCaroline_episode

Hi. Here I am looking read 4 read. Just saw this queen and I want to make a R4R with you. How do you feel about that queen
Here is my Instagram in case you want to DM; EmilyCaroline_episode

Hi. Just saw this queen and I want to make a R4R with you. How do you feel about that queen
Here is my Instagram in case you want to DM; EmilyCaroline_episode

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Thanks for your reading and your feedback :smiling_face_with_three_hearts::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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@MyEpisodees Hope you like your feedback!

10 Preconditions Ep 1
  • I think you had too many options for outfits.
  • I think you rushed with the kissing scene.
  • Liked that you included the title into the story.
  • Loved your outro.
10 Preconditions Ep 2
  • Loved how you included the days of the week on the screen.
  • Loved the relationship between Sierra and Lola.
  • Check your spelling of words and if they make sense.
  • Impressed with your real life dog.
  • Try not to put flashing words because they’re hard to read.
  • Loved how you have choices.
  • I don’t think the guys in the background should have the same outfit.
  • Make sure to use the right punctuation.
  • Didn’t like how the Jonathan kissing scene was repetitive.
10 Preconditions Ep 3
  • Loved how smooth the transitions were in the sex scene.
  • Loved how Merlin just sleeps everywhere.
  • It was hilarious how Lola walked in on that guy in the bathroom.
  • Love how Sierra just teases Lola.
  • I think Jonathan broke Lola :joy: :joy:
  • Yay! Jonathan came back.

Overall, I think episode 1 was pointless as the exact same things is going in episode 2 but I really love it so far and will definitely continue reading. Just make sure to check your spelling and that you use the right punctuation.

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Thank you so much for the feedback!
I’ll look over the things you pointed out again. :sparkles:

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@Mystic.Ceb Hope you like your feedback!

The Constant Journey Ep 1
  • Loved how you introduced yourself and your husband and gave a bit of information.
  • Loved how you had warnings before the scene.
  • I hate Veno for being a horrible father.
  • I love how strong Esmee is.
  • Loved your advanced overlays.
  • Love how Julio saved the kids from Veno.
  • Try not to put too much space between words.
  • Make sure your sentences make sense.
  • Katerina takes a long time to leave the scene.
  • Love how you gave a bit of information about Tyler’s and Katerina’s parents.
  • I think it would’ve been better if Eddie entered from the left.
  • I hate how annoying Eddie is.
  • Make sure to check your spelling.
  • Loved how you gave a background story about the AFFK.
  • Make sure to use the right animation.
  • Love Tyler’s humour.
  • Loved how you introduced everyone.
  • Love how Esmee teases everyone.
  • It was hilarious how fast Tyler ran away from Esmee.
The Constant Journey Ep 2
  • If you’re supposed to walk out of the scene make sure you’re not sliding.
  • Love how you made Tyler’s words orange to show how he’s not physically there.
  • Make sure to know when and when not to use capital letters.
  • I hate how mean Avery is to Kaelyn.
  • Loved how you have a timeline.
  • Love how Esmee is a badass.
  • Loved how Julio’s words were blue to show that he’s on the phone.
  • I love how kind Ferariti is.
  • I wonder who “Red” is.
  • Love the bond between the triplets.
  • I love Elle and Esmee together.
  • I’m really curious about Legacy and Nitro.
  • Loving the bond between Felixity and Klaus.
  • Esmee is such a good mother.
  • Love Legacy’s and Nitro’s entrance.
  • Loved the positivity you gave at the end.
The Constant Journey Ep 3
  • Love how you share a bit about your personal life.
  • Love the way Esmee, Legacy and Nitro talk.
  • I love the outfits.
  • Love Zoya’s energy.
  • Love how everyone listens to Esmee.
  • It’s hilarious how they named the guns.
  • Wait. Does Katerina have a crush on Eddie?
  • It was good to see everyone handling the mission.
  • I hate Esmee’s parents for being cruel.
  • I love Eddie for breaking up with his toxic girlfriend.
  • Love the energy that Klaus and Felixity have.
  • Loving the way Esmee plays with boys.
  • Hate Richie for making girls suffer.
  • Loved how you were sleeping at the end.

Overall, you had a lot of grammar mistakes and punctuation mistakes but you had a good story going on so far. Just go back and fix those mistakes and maybe get a proofreader for the future.

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Thank you so much for your feedback. :star:
I will go back and correct the mentioned information. :heavy_check_mark:

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Thanks for this thread :blush:
If you want you can check out my new Mafia story!

Writer: Anahi
Genre: **fantasy, Action, Drama **
Instagram account: anahi_episode_
Style: LL

Emilio falls in love with crystal but because of his past mistakes and he’s mafia life, will Crystal and Emilio be able to be together?

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Hi there,thank you so much for doing this, I’ll make sure to check out your story! I released my first story six days ago, I believe whoever is into vampire romance will surely enjoy it!

Instagram: @.fairys..novels._
Title: Lean on my shoulder ✾
Genre: Drama/Romance/Fantasy
Description: “Punished” in going back to high school he was forced to comply and simmer down. What happens when the “almost” queen bee he abhors makes him a cogent tender that’ll twist it all?
(it has full CC btw)
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5208456431337472
Small cover:

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