R4R and promoting my story (you are my sunshine)

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I finished yours

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Bump

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I’m reading yours rn

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I love Ryan he’s hilarious.
Edit: I’ve read the first chapter the errors I found were spots, zooming, in the reader message you didn’t capitalize Fall Out Boy properly, Luke fell twice when he crashed into Sam, and when Sam was talking to her best friends in the courtyard they were out of frame. But I did like when Luke was speaking in Italian.

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Okay I’ll work on that thank you.

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