R4R and Story Feedback!

Np :wink: I’ll still share it on my page, going to read then I’ll send screenshots.

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Did you want any feedback?

Whatever you want lol. The beginning chapters of my story aren’t very good cuz I wrote them a really long time ago. I might go back and revamp them later.

Aah gotcha

Sorry took so long my passes are refilled. Checking ouy 2 & 3 not finished yet. I love it so far! Way to go on yr first story!

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Hey hun congrats on publishing check out my thread and we can a rfr.

complete!

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yay I’m glad you like it!

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I love your characters, especially Gabe!

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Thanks so much for this thread! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Here’s my story:

Title: Reality behind Glasses
Genre: Drama, Romance (Comedy)
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon!)
Description: Layla returns back home to reunite with her childhood friends - disguised as a guy! But on her first day in school, she’s exposed by one of her classmates! [LL,CC, Art,Choices M]
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5385205688631296
Cover:

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Ooh sounds cool. I’ll definitely check that out!

Hello, wanna r4r?

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Sure! Just leave your story info and I’ll add it to my list :blush:

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Link the Red Curtain

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there you go :slight_smile:

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You’ve always been a good girl, one to follow the rules and live by a moral and sacred code content with your life and the direction it is heading
Until one ‘kiss’. One truly amazing forbidden kiss, creates a knock on effect that completely disrupts your life
Funny how one kiss can hold the power to bring you to your knees, In every way imaginable

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Great! Yours is on the list, should be done tomorrow :blush:

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Hey Alma, I’ve done 3 chapters of your story! Pretty interesting plot :relaxed:

Screenshots


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Glad you liked it! Send me your link whenever you can and I’ll read it.

How silly, I thought you had my link. :sweat_smile:
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4580943257731072.

Thank you Alma! :purple_heart:

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