Hello! i’ve recently just published my story and for some reason my episode app is glitching, thus, i am unable to fully go through my own episodes.
Anyways, i’m looking for HONEST feedback, and tips on what i can improve on, ill also check out a story you’d like me to - since i’m in dire need of new stories!
If needed, i’ll also give you some feedback and tips! thanks !!
My story title is: Forever and a Day
Author: Breanna G.
Style: Ink
CC: You can’t change the MC or the MC’s love interest but later on in the story you can create yourself as well as a LI!
Description: Their love ran deep, Forever and a Day they’d say. Who knew it was only temporary, certainly not Deja and Foster.
Status: 3 episodes (more coming soon)
Genre: Romance , also kinda drama
If you’re interested, leave all the info i provided above but for your story! i’ll check it out asap! And if you’d like me to give you feedback and tips - also where, like in PM or what?
Thanks again!
p.s // if you see this and think it’s too late, trust me it isn’t! i’ll check your story out in no time!
Hey, count me in:
Title : New Face
Genre : Drama, Romance
Style : Limelight
Episodes : 3 (On Going)
Instagram : @episode_thepublisher
Description : A tragic event forced you to leave town. Will you be able to find peace again or is your troubled past coming for you?
Title: Identical Genre: Mystery Description: Violet has only lived a perfect life. But that perfect life is built on a dark secret. Will that secret stop her at a chance at love or will it ruin everything? Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5565579763974144 Cover:
so far i’ve read the first chapter and besides some minor coding mistakes, it’s a great story! I found it to be actually genuinely funny, which was a pleasant surprise. The story line is the basic cliche but i don’t mind, since it’s actually pretty funny!
i’ve noticed that some of the characters stand idle while others are walking away, and that in the beginning of the scene it takes a sec for all characters to pop up, it’s kinda an easy fix really, just use “&”
for ex.
INT. NEW YORK CITY - DAY
&CHARACTER stands screen left
or as they’re walking away
&CHARACTER walks to spot _________
like i said, i’ve only the read the first chapter, so maybe you’ve fixed these mistakes in other episodes, it’s going in my favorites!
Moved to Promote Your Story since you’re doing R4Rs. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions.
I’ve actually already fixed those errors so I’m not sure what’s up with that. But I’ll have another look 
