R4R I would like feedback on my new story

I have a new story on episode, and if you can give me some feedback so i know if i should keep writing. Thank you.

Title: Susan’s Mate

Author: Crimsonsky

Style: INK

Chapters: 3

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Susan is a young woman, but she is not an ordinary young woman. She is a werewolf and she has a lot of plans for her life, but what happens when she finds her mate.

LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5708880482271232

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Hey, I’m down for a R4R :smile:
Title: Skai’s Stories
**I screenshot proof
Author; Mystery
Insta: Mystery.episode
Genre: drama/romance
Style: INK
Episodes: 4 (More coming soon!)

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Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

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Here is the description of my story :

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 11 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736

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Hi! R4R?

Name: The Ember Moon Pack

Description:

Being a werewolf is not easy. Especially when you have 3 hot hybrids following your every move.

New episodes every week!

Customizable Characters, 5 Endings, Choices Matter

Chapters: technically 8 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight

Link:

Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

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Hey, I have actually already started reading your story is very good I love stories about werewolves and supernatural creatures. I always search for new stories on episode about them.
And if you would like please check out my story, keep up the good work. :blush:

Hi id be very happy to do r4r with you, would you directly message me on instagram so we can discuss the reads @fongjoline 100% will respond to you
My story called Rose
Genre mystery
Style ink
Description Already struggling with her past,Rose falls into some more dramatic romance, mystery, what adventure and heartbreak will she face next?

Hi, I’m sorry I don’t have Instagram.

It’s ok,we can read 3 episode of each other story and send screenshot in here, OK? The link to my story