R4R - Need some criticing! And need some new episode to read!


#1

Hi everyone!

I’m moderately new to episode, I’ve been writing this episode for a while and need some critical feedback, there’s a few episode and in honesty I feel the first few are not as good as my later ones.
Let me know what you think!

Plus I need some new episode to read that aren’t cliché or just writers that are like me new and have an ‘awesome’ story :grin::grin:

Hoping this is in the right topic :face_with_raised_eyebrow:

http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6431323523907584


#2

I will read your story, leave you a fanmail, and PM my review of yours if you do the same for me. How does that sound? :slight_smile:


#3

That sounds awesome :grin: thank you! And I look forward to reading yours!


#4

No problem. Happy to help a new author! It says your story has 1.5K reads though. Thanks. :blush:


#5

nice one


#6

could u do me a favour
i want a link of an episode story called turning tables could u send me the link


#7

Yea, like I say not new, moderately new it’s my only episode and I haven’t been using the app for long. I went from like 200 to 1000 in a week :scream: like when I posted the not latest but one before episode. I just want to some crictal feedback to make it better and what people think.


#8

Hey! I’ll check out your story and maybe you could read mine too! Here’s my link:


#9

Hi ! I would love to check your story out! Send me a DM in instagram to send u screenshots :slight_smile:
So here’s my story if you’re interesed in reading it! :slight_smile:
Here’s my story:
Title: Girlhood
Author: Oumnia
Genre: Drama
Description: Kethius might seem like any ordinary teenage boy but in fact he hides a unique secret…
Number of Episodes: 8 (ongoing)
Instagram: @oumniaepisode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5172961657356288


#10

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#11